In-Game

A new game and console are following a bizarre advertising & distribution strategy. Mainly no advertising and almost giving it away.
Many asking if the "Full Immersion VR set" was even real.

Including our main character Julius, right until it arrived on his doorstep.
Excited to play the first VR MMO-RPG also rumored to be capable host 10'000'000 players a server he ignored any and all red-flags to boot it up.

If only the package mentioned the minimum playtime requirement was a little steep. in that it's until he beat the game or died, whichever came first.

I'm not perfect with my grammar and my prose definitely needs to develop but I still think I can make a fun alternative to SAO with it's own flavor, style, feel and reason for existing.

I'm sorta speeding through most of these first chapter cause I wanna get started but i'll revisit most of it to remake or re-edit, think of this as a draft to get opinions, 1st manuscript if you will.
I look forward to any and all critiques! Shower me with em even if you aren't confident! I wanna know what you like & don't bout my work!

I'm not perfect with my grammar and my prose definitely needs to develop but I still think I can make a fun alternative to SAO with it's own flavor, style, feel and reason for existing.

I'm sorta speeding through most of these first chapter cause I wanna get start...

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GenreActionAdventureDramaGameLitRPG
UpdatedMar 16, 2024
Chapters6
Writing StatusOngoing
Word Count9,365
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