Hatsukoi

Tooru Miyazawa is a regular 2nd year high school student living an average life. He has a crush on her classmate Yumeko Nakano, but right when he was about to confess he gets interrupted by the transferred student, Izumi Takeda. He gets back the chance to confess, however he doubts and flees. Later he meets Takeda again, who promises to help him with Nakano. Now Tooru will have to figure out his emotions and discover what does true love really means for him.

This is my first novel, i would really appreciate any advice on how to improve.