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I like to be creative and write stories. I love writing fantasy stories and horror stories but as times goes on I begin imagine many more from different genres. I will be post on RoyalRoadl.com
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Oct 06, 2017
To:CHatley Herrera
OK I really understand what your saying now I looked at your first chapter and noticed the format way easier to read than mine. I can't even skim through my story I'm going to try and edit mine now
Ok thanks
OK forgive me but I think I understand kind of I need to reread it and think to myself OK is it to clustered am I understanding it so in should kinda space Mt dialogue out like a mini paragraph so people can know dialogue is taking place and dont worry about the comment section or criticism I love constructive criticism it HELPS ME I'm not easily upset thank you for it lol and my comment section won't be flooding I dont really think I'll get noticed really at all
Ok what do you specifically when you say properly format I'm confused on that sorry.
Oct 03, 2017
Ok i revised all three can I get some feedback on how they are now? Are they still a little confusing and messy or is it better?
Oct 02, 2017
ok will do thanks
ok thanks for telling me
Ok thank you i will to keep my grammatical errors small, but i'm not proofreading please forgive me. I'm just trying to get people to read my story like you to get feed back on my plot but thank you again. I like being critiqued it helps further better my writing thanks