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I like to be creative and write stories. I love writing fantasy stories and horror stories but as times goes on I begin imagine many more from different genres. I will be post on RoyalRoadl.com
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Oct 24, 2017
Wow this gets more interesting and better as I continue reading
Oct 15, 2017
I liked how Flare and Rain linked fingers together to express their friendship. Seems like it could be more.
Nice Interesting
Oct 13, 2017
To:chesarka
OK thanks I thought you were going to say they were completely idiotic. Even if no one likes the names I can always try and think of different names I just hope people like the story I put a lot of thought into this story. By the time I finish editing the rest of it this a just part 1. All of the stuff in my story tie up eventually.
Oct 12, 2017
OK I revised some names in all of my chapters that irked you a little to see I want to know if they are better or did it get worse?
Oct 08, 2017
OK kansha and Mr. Howkuu I didnt look up terms or anything I created those but the rest I mean I understand what your saying I just kind of describing my characters through names I guess. These characters are the only ones I did like this all the others I have are mine
Yea I looked up some these words and I. Tried to link the names with the characters that kind of represent them is it bad?
Oct 07, 2017
Yes indeed
I feel bad for the poor winged creature he stepped on lol I like this.
I like this it's straight to the point of how the story is going to begin. Also very interesting this sounds comical kind of "washing the king's panties", either way I think it's unique and I like the story definitely will be adding to my library.
That is crazy unique lol I love it other beings have been among humans all long along. Also and Public expose is a crime that's funny and cool I love this!
I like the way this story unfolds
Thanks glad you like it
Oct 06, 2017
Thanks now I just have to keep working on it and trying to get noticed
Ok thanks I'm done for tonight I hope it's more comfortable to read