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Esoteric. And tired.
Jun 07, 2023
To:Kitsune
Thank you for the kind words senpai! Kiyoko's concept was the type who you'd always be wary of and I'm glad it's seen that way.
Jun 06, 2023
Just a style suggestion! Pls put more paragraphs since the descriptions tend to eat up the dialogue. Personally, I like to be able to mentally breathe and not get bombarded with sentences x.x
Very good start regardless. Gives me Natsu e no Tunnel vibes! Best of luck!
Jun 05, 2023
And the curtains rise for another strong contest entry! Let's gooo!!
Jun 04, 2023
Ooh, some philosophical stuff but I like thinking stories! Will be on the lookout for further chapters o.o)b
To:Harmonica Writes
Tbh I'm getting kinda discouraged bc niche stuff doesn't get recognition for obvious reasons. But I'll keep trying to write what I love reading ^^7
To:Syed Al Wasee
Thank for sparing a moment senpai! I'll be giving it go since I've got a lot of time in my hands. o.o)b
Jun 02, 2023
To:Pearlyn.M
Thank you senpai! I really tried to portray her as mysterious and I'm glad it was seen that way!
P.S. Someone famous notice me I'm so happy >///<
