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Alex Theriot

Be sure to check out "Aesthetica", my entry to this year's writing contest! For fans of cyberpunk, scifi, and dystopia greats such as Ghost in the Shell, Psycho-Pass, Shinsekai Yori, and Ergo Proxy!

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Aug 12, 2022

To:Deleted User

It does hurt..

It's a terrible day.. for rain.. 😢

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Chapter:12

Aug 10, 2022

To:Deleted User

You would be correct on the firewall! And you may be onto something with the eye color, but what Roy is worried about is what she has to do to get the red eyes ;)

Who is Ken? You mean Ronnie Applewood? 😜

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Chapter:11

Aug 09, 2022

To:LinYang

Same though. Thanks for stopping by 😁

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Chapter:1

Aug 03, 2022

To:Deleted User

Except tower-kun 😞

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Chapter:9

Jul 29, 2022

Ray still best boy, so much that I didn't quite buy his outburst. Maybe it's just my rose-tinted ray-bans?

Nice fast-forward sequence. That made the chapter feel very well paced.

She Can't Be That Perfect!!

Chapter:10

Jul 28, 2022

To:Deleted User

Hopefully Ken's good points will come across in the next few chapters! ;)

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Chapter:8

Jul 28, 2022

To:Deleted User

He's holding up surprisingly well without his aesthetics, huh? Meanwhile Ken took aesthetics and is flying high in cyberspace lol. Poor Navi, it only wants to help him 😭

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Chapter:8

Jul 22, 2022

To:Deleted User

(I need aesthetics)

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Chapter:7

Jul 20, 2022

Yep that's it! Though I havent been writing any family names first for consistency.

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Chapter:6

Jul 20, 2022

To:Deleted User

She is Vietnamese, you're right! I should probably show her full name when Roy makes eye contact with her huh? For clarification. Anyway thanks for reading 😁

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Chapter:6

Jul 19, 2022

To:Deleted User

Are you surprised he's holding up so far? He's actually been off them the same amount of time as Felix, but then there's the issue of what each of them have seen/heard to affect their fortitude.

Oh thank you for that! I was a bit worried with the mixing of quotes and navi convos/Ken convos via navi. It was fun to write but I probably got carried away with the tagless dialogue!

Thanks for all of your comments! 😁

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Chapter:5

Jul 19, 2022

To:Deleted User

Glad you liked! And yeah, can you imagine having that nagging in your head? I'd need aesthetics too! 😂

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Chapter:4

Jul 19, 2022

To:Deleted User

I know you got clarification in the next chapter but I can see how the word "allowed" might not make it super clear that it's Ken's condition rather than Aesthetic itself. I'll have to look at rewording that!

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Chapter:3

Jul 19, 2022

To:Deleted User

Ken's got his priorities straight, alright 😅

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Chapter:2

Jul 15, 2022

To:Deleted User

I swear im gonna need a bottle of Suntory after using it to death 😅 And you might be onto something! Thanks for reading, Tomo!

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Chapter:5

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