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Just Another Adult

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Nov 29, 2023

The description around Charlotte on the stairs is really good, and it gets across her personality well too. Line of the chapter goes to the bit about his mom sending too many emojis though... you don't gotta be so real in fiction!

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My Undead Maid

Chapter:2

Nov 27, 2023

To:ItWasntMe

Glad you're enjoying it, and I appreciate you looking at the whole thing... CHAPTER 0 was meant as a long atmosphere/tension build, but it ended up getting away from me. Ooops~

I, Human!

I, Human!

Chapter:0

Nov 26, 2023

I love the classic hook of "eccentric relative leaves everything to down-and-out protagonist", and I'm looking forward to finding out why, but also why there is bad blood between Henry towards Morgan.

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My Undead Maid

Chapter:1

Nov 26, 2023

To:K-J-Whitten

Thanks for the feedback, I'll bear it in mind. Glad you've enjoyed VISUAL SHOCK so far. Everything needs a setting, and I hadn't seen any works based around alternative fashion since Paradise Kiss, so why not fill a niche!

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VISUAL SHOCK - sometimes you have to promise not to fall in love~

Chapter:3

Sep 12, 2023

To:Rafa The Potato

Thank you very much! Glad you enjoyed reading, both the activity itself and my story!

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VISUAL SHOCK - sometimes you have to promise not to fall in love~

Chapter:40

Aug 31, 2023

To:ValiantKnight

glad it was a satisfying conclusion~

VISUAL SHOCK - FINAL COVER

VISUAL SHOCK - sometimes you have to promise not to fall in love~

Chapter:40

Aug 30, 2023

To:iamthelaurs

was honestly tempted to go with a bad end, but then i remembered the competition needed it to be a wholesome romance, so... 👀

VISUAL SHOCK - FINAL COVER

VISUAL SHOCK - sometimes you have to promise not to fall in love~

Chapter:40

Aug 30, 2023

To:iamthelaurs

coulda been a himeno one...

VISUAL SHOCK - FINAL COVER

VISUAL SHOCK - sometimes you have to promise not to fall in love~

Chapter:39

Aug 30, 2023

To:ValiantKnight

...and that's not all~

VISUAL SHOCK - FINAL COVER

VISUAL SHOCK - sometimes you have to promise not to fall in love~

Chapter:39

Aug 30, 2023

To:ValiantKnight

sad boi™ time~

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VISUAL SHOCK - sometimes you have to promise not to fall in love~

Chapter:38

Aug 30, 2023

To:ValiantKnight

achievement unlocked - additional lore is now available

VISUAL SHOCK - FINAL COVER

VISUAL SHOCK - sometimes you have to promise not to fall in love~

Chapter:34

Aug 30, 2023

To:ValiantKnight

what's wrong with Toshi?!. he seems like a completely reasonable well adjusted person...

VISUAL SHOCK - FINAL COVER

VISUAL SHOCK - sometimes you have to promise not to fall in love~

Chapter:29

Aug 30, 2023

To:iamthelaurs

you gotta be nice to your pets sometimes otherwise they run away...

VISUAL SHOCK - FINAL COVER

VISUAL SHOCK - sometimes you have to promise not to fall in love~

Chapter:36

Aug 30, 2023

To:iamthelaurs

Kaori also knows how to make rice and green tea, separately or together, this is canon~

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VISUAL SHOCK - sometimes you have to promise not to fall in love~

Chapter:35

Aug 30, 2023

To:ValiantKnight

i don't think they've managed to go to a concert WITHOUT some drama kicking off~

VISUAL SHOCK - FINAL COVER

VISUAL SHOCK - sometimes you have to promise not to fall in love~

Chapter:33