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Just Another Adult

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Aug 29, 2023

To:ValiantKnight

Glad I didn't fumble it and set it up just right~

VISUAL SHOCK - FINAL COVER

VISUAL SHOCK - sometimes you have to promise not to fall in love~

Chapter:11

Aug 29, 2023

To:ValiantKnight

It is so hard not to throw in random bits of Japanese, my weeb heart aches for it... but a simple "Cheers!" felt too plain, so what else do you say? And not "Here's mud in your eye!" 👀

VISUAL SHOCK - FINAL COVER

VISUAL SHOCK - sometimes you have to promise not to fall in love~

Chapter:8

Aug 29, 2023

To:ValiantKnight

The vocal equivalent of a smoulder~

VISUAL SHOCK - FINAL COVER

VISUAL SHOCK - sometimes you have to promise not to fall in love~

Chapter:7

Aug 28, 2023

To:ValiantKnight

Clothes are only good while you fit into them, music while you're into the band or genre... everything has a time and place, and hopefully you can pass it all onto someone else once you no longer resonate with it~

VISUAL SHOCK - FINAL COVER

VISUAL SHOCK - sometimes you have to promise not to fall in love~

Chapter:5

Aug 28, 2023

To:Raya

My secret is out...

VISUAL SHOCK - FINAL COVER

VISUAL SHOCK - sometimes you have to promise not to fall in love~

Chapter:1

Aug 28, 2023

To:iamthelaurs

but wait... THERE'S MORE!!!1!

VISUAL SHOCK - FINAL COVER

VISUAL SHOCK - sometimes you have to promise not to fall in love~

Chapter:29

Aug 28, 2023

To:iamthelaurs

there's good flirtatious teasing and then there's whatever the annoying bully girl trend is in anime... i try to stay on the right side of history here~

VISUAL SHOCK - FINAL COVER

VISUAL SHOCK - sometimes you have to promise not to fall in love~

Chapter:28

Aug 25, 2023

To:Peace Sign

Thanks very much. I've tried to keep the fluff light, using VK as set dressing and points of conflict, rather than the focus of the piece. It's about the characters and their emotional journey, so I hope that comes through more.

VISUAL SHOCK - FINAL COVER

VISUAL SHOCK - sometimes you have to promise not to fall in love~

Chapter:1

Aug 20, 2023

To:iamthelaurs

If I have time before the deadline, I would like to get another chapter with him in, but if not then... well, if I don't win the writing contest I have a lot of extra chapters I can insert.

VISUAL SHOCK - FINAL COVER

VISUAL SHOCK - sometimes you have to promise not to fall in love~

Chapter:24

Aug 17, 2023

To:iamthelaurs

As the 90's isekai protag Michael Jordan once said, "Stop it. Get some help." but seriously, thanks for the high praise. I'm glad I'm actually making things as emotive as I hope. I know it's gonna be a good one when I'M getting choked up writing it.

VISUAL SHOCK - FINAL COVER

VISUAL SHOCK - sometimes you have to promise not to fall in love~

Chapter:21

Jul 28, 2023

To:iamthelaurs

What was your favourite bit? I never really intend for things to be funny or serious, it's just how they come out. I try to get across the tension or anxiety of a scene, the emotion/atmosphere of it, so feedback on where I'm doing more is appreciated!

VISUAL SHOCK - FINAL COVER

VISUAL SHOCK - sometimes you have to promise not to fall in love~

Chapter:11

Jul 26, 2023

To:iamthelaurs

glad both characters being little sods to each other when drunk is amusing~

VISUAL SHOCK - FINAL COVER

VISUAL SHOCK - sometimes you have to promise not to fall in love~

Chapter:8

Jul 26, 2023

To:iamthelaurs

fake it til you make it~

VISUAL SHOCK - FINAL COVER

VISUAL SHOCK - sometimes you have to promise not to fall in love~

Chapter:9

Jul 25, 2023

To:iamthelaurs

wait until the new cover art drops... Tai got that gap moe between absolute dork and aggro exterior~

VISUAL SHOCK - FINAL COVER

VISUAL SHOCK - sometimes you have to promise not to fall in love~

Chapter:4

Jul 25, 2023

To:iamthelaurs

it's evocative, it gets the people going~

VISUAL SHOCK - FINAL COVER

VISUAL SHOCK - sometimes you have to promise not to fall in love~

Chapter:2