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Just your usual writer and aspiring mangaka. (20+)
Jul 22, 2023
To:Deleted User
Your noise is probably just tricking you. probably.... 🙃
Somewhat close indeed! A perfect setting for a confession!
Both are very possible scenarios! Is this a dream? Did something bad happen to Minoru? Who knows?~
My oh my~ you have a sharp eye! Lilies are a perfect way to describe Saki subtlely so I'm really glad you caught that! 😁
Thank you very very much for all your kind words! I wasn't sure how the death would feel to most (as I did start this just for-fun rather than competing) so I'm glad you are enjoying it!
To:Valentine
Aww, that's sad to hear about the fishies :(
But yes~ for this story, I'm aiming more for an Eastern fantasy style (since I have more experience with night markets and of the sort). Perhaps I could have made it more unique but oh well lol
Jul 20, 2023
To:lolitroy
He's still a big softie!
Ahhhh, you're making me blush. I'm not sure how much you can learn from an amateur writer like me but I'm glad to be of help!
Thank you! I'm glad that the worldbuilding is whimsical and helps show what Minoru is seeing and feeling! It's good to know I can do something right! 😀
To:minatika
Thank you! I'm glad the action scene is enjoyable. I've never been good at such things so at least I really am improving!
I sure do hope Shinji's fun dynamic stays! Unlike before, he has a clearer mission set in my head so it'll be fun to see how that goes! 😆
I'm glad the start didn't scare you away lol 😁
Perhaps ypu're right!
Jul 19, 2023
I wonder... if Saki's dad kills Minoru, where would a dead person go if this is the afterlife. 🙃
Luckily, Azurillia's not one of those be-careful-what-you-wish-for type of fairy!
Afterlife doesn't necessarily mean death~