Jul 22, 2023

To:Deleted User

Somewhat close indeed! A perfect setting for a confession!

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Jul 22, 2023

To:Deleted User

Both are very possible scenarios! Is this a dream? Did something bad happen to Minoru? Who knows?~

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Jul 22, 2023

To:Deleted User

My oh my~ you have a sharp eye! Lilies are a perfect way to describe Saki subtlely so I'm really glad you caught that! 😁

Thank you very very much for all your kind words! I wasn't sure how the death would feel to most (as I did start this just for-fun rather than competing) so I'm glad you are enjoying it!

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Jul 22, 2023

To:Valentine

Aww, that's sad to hear about the fishies :(

But yes~ for this story, I'm aiming more for an Eastern fantasy style (since I have more experience with night markets and of the sort). Perhaps I could have made it more unique but oh well lol

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Jul 20, 2023

To:lolitroy

He's still a big softie!

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Jul 20, 2023

To:Valentine

Ahhhh, you're making me blush. I'm not sure how much you can learn from an amateur writer like me but I'm glad to be of help!

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Jul 20, 2023

To:Valentine

Thank you! I'm glad that the worldbuilding is whimsical and helps show what Minoru is seeing and feeling! It's good to know I can do something right! 😀

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Jul 20, 2023

To:minatika

Thank you! I'm glad the action scene is enjoyable. I've never been good at such things so at least I really am improving!

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Jul 20, 2023

To:minatika

I sure do hope Shinji's fun dynamic stays! Unlike before, he has a clearer mission set in my head so it'll be fun to see how that goes! 😆

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Jul 20, 2023

To:Valentine

I'm glad the start didn't scare you away lol 😁

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Jul 20, 2023

To:Deleted User

Perhaps ypu're right!

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Jul 19, 2023

To:minatika

I wonder... if Saki's dad kills Minoru, where would a dead person go if this is the afterlife. 🙃

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Jul 19, 2023

To:minatika

Luckily, Azurillia's not one of those be-careful-what-you-wish-for type of fairy!

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Jul 19, 2023

To:minatika

Afterlife doesn't necessarily mean death~

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Jul 19, 2023

To:minatika

It's fun trying to write fantasy and some descriptions. Definitely more new for me.

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