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Jul 25, 2025

This is a fun opening! Kenichi is immediately hateable for spoiling two plot points in a book that the person he's talking to hasn't finished reading yet 🫠 Looking forward to seeing how this develops

I Heard You Like Isekai, So I Put Isekai in Your Isekai

Chapter:0

Jul 25, 2025

I like the dramatisation of the wound. The way you've written it really keeps the reader in the mind of the character overfixating on the pain and fear

Please just leave me alone

Chapter:1

Jul 25, 2025

To:Hollow

Thank you for reading! That's a good point, I agree that the text can look denser when posting it on here compared to reading it on a word processor while I'm working on it. I'll have a think about how to tackle that to go back over in an edit. Thank you for the comment ✌️

Raptures & Regulations

Chapter:1

Jul 25, 2025

"It was like air had rewritten itself and forgotten to include me", this line goes so hard. Love the way you're writing. Keep it up 🪁

The Last Revision

Chapter:6

Jul 25, 2025

To:TheLeanna_M

That means a lot coming from yourself. Your worldbuilding is honestly next-level 🥳

Raptures & Regulations

Chapter:3

Jul 25, 2025

To:Emeryy

Sounds exciting! I'd love to hear your idea after I finish working on this story! I'd want to make sure that I have enough time to focus on discussing it with you and seeing what you would have done differently after I've fully explored my approach

Raptures & Regulations

Chapter:1

Jul 25, 2025

To:TheLeanna_M

Thank you very much! The conversations were definitely inspired by some I've had as well haha. It means a lot that you're enjoying it so far considering how much I've been enjoying your writing as well!

Raptures & Regulations

Chapter:1

Jul 20, 2025

I'm really enjoying the way you write, and your ideas feel fresh. I'm looking forward to seeing how this develops.

The Last Revision

Chapter:5

Jul 17, 2025

To:Emeryy

Thank you very much! I'm glad that you're enjoying it!

Raptures & Regulations

Chapter:1

Jul 06, 2022

This is awesome, I really like the concept of city avatars 🤩

Feathers

Chapter:1

Jul 06, 2022

Did she smash the plates on purpose? 🤔

I’m in love with a Chinese Nationalist

Chapter:7

Jul 06, 2022

This is a sick opening, very thrilling

Flora

Chapter:0

May 28, 2022

Merlin's book is a good idea to quickly share worldbuilding exposition 👍 So many cool elements

The Immortal Witch's Death Wish

Chapter:2

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