Jun 13, 2022
Whew...This was a lovely short story that felt like I was falling in love amidst a moving blurring scenery where the seasons are dying one after another but are only renewed in love.
When I saw that this novel was completed, I was only going in to read just a bit of the first chapter but then I didn't expect I would be pulled into the whole thing until the bittersweet finale! The french words were also a lovely touch, and the dialogue was so poetic. It felt like I was almost caught up in some latin romantic poem.
Overall, this is was really great.
I would say the only thing I noticed is that occasionally there was weird wording of sentences (in terms of grammar) and switches in tense. Lastly, this short story might benefit to spilt up into chapters.
Besides that, what a lovely ride this has been. ❤️