May 20, 2024
To:sheepish
Thank you for the comment! You’re right that it’s blasphemous that there’s not a single objection in the first chapter. I couldn’t think of a way to fit it in considering the scene had the prosecution on the stand, but I’ll just have to write around it and add it in! Definitely agree that I didn’t focus enough on the environment, I was hoping to keep the prologue short so I wasn’t generous on detail, but it ended up being long anyways. Do expect a lot more world building and descriptions for the new realm itself! I wanted this to feel a lot like those typical law shows like you said, so I tend to focus more on dialogue since that’s what I enjoy writing, but hope to get better at environment descriptions along the way!