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Jul 17, 2022
To:Deleted User
sure!
I dont know i really like this dialogue thing more then narrator but i tried to add prose cause few people told me to explain abit about the scene cause they cant understand...So yeah...thats why...
Time is my real problem...I dont have enough time...I have full story in my mind and i want it as a manga or something but college exams and work at home...That just kills my time
I will try to improve from next time...But i thought when people are angry...thy tend to say chiche stuff
Yeah...I dont know how to create tension in a scene...Im still a newbie😭
Yeah...I wanted some illegal stuff around this even because in my perspective this world is almost corruption
Yeah,So many people told me the same words...Im actually pretty new to this writing stuff...I would try to improve...Acutally in my mid i wanted to write a manga in place of novel but im pretty bad at drawing.
Jul 14, 2022
To:Arashi Sensei
Thanks mann means alot...Yeah...Need to improve my English
Jul 10, 2022
To:Makech
I don't know why,I really like this pattern of writting...Let's see
Jul 02, 2022
To:Juno
Yeah... Wait wait
Jun 28, 2022
Thanks bro keep reading it!!
Yeahhhh read it broo
Jun 25, 2022
To:Aziz_ahamed713
Please comment like this in future also🌝🌝 for engagement
To:Abhishek Kottakota
Thanks for the fake comment 🌚🌚🫂
