Jun 17, 2022
Oh, Haru (Spring) appeared quite easily. Still confused where the SASMHNS (a shorter name, no...?) is located (Phillippines?). I agree with Tomoyuki, dividing the chapter in two would've been better (I guess, after the fall).
Overall, it's a nice chapter, but I feel the reason for offering the comitee duty is a bit weak. If there was a line "her eyes glinted when I said 'anything'... And that scared me", i think you could've thrown anything else in the future. A bit curious about Autumn reason to stay behind, but immediately leave after the call. i hope the best for your novel!