Jun 27, 2022
I would recommend a reread of the chapter before you post it, there are very obvious spelling mistakes in a few different spots. (Fvmaily, recidive, îs). Also this reads like somebody just took a huge breath and said their entire life story in that one breath as fast as possible, there are no pauses to allow for the reader to take in what’s going on. Hope this comes across as helpful. Good luck on your story!
