Jan 19, 2023
Hey, sorry for the long delay. I was working on a new murder Idea and got sidetracked.
Now that I say it, it feels kindof wrong lol.
But anyhow on with the REVIEW!
Suzuka got really angry and started to throw
instead of
Suzuka gets really angry and starts to
we didn't do anything to that guy Antonio to
We didn't do anything to Antonio
He would never do that to me, we were friends for six years
instead of
He would never do that to me, we are friends for six years.
there are a few more places, where the tense in the words isn't matching the situation. Re-read this part and fix it accordingly.
Apart from that okay chapter. But would be a lot better if these errors were addressed.