Aug 20, 2022
I was waiting for this story to be finished before starting it because I knew I would get hooked right of the bat. And I am! I know I'm going to binge this, and I regret nothing.
I really like how you presented the characters and the setting. Your writing style paints such a clear picture it is a pleasure to read, and I believe you really mastered the "show, don't tell" technique.
It's a really good start, and I'm sure I'm going to love the rest of it.