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I'm a 21-year-old author who enjoys writing almost every genre under the sun! Currently I am working on the YA BL romance novel Fair, no Fair.
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Oct 23, 2022
That's fascinating. I love how you describe the goblins as using the terrain and their skills to their benefit. Like, climbing up the wall is genius. Very well-written stuff!
I have a feeling that the goblin's abandoning the tunnels and cities without putting in any barricades or traps could have been a tactical choice. My guess is that instead of fighting the dwarves head-on, they might have decided to trap them and drown or burn them for example. That way, they wouldn't get any casualties beyond the goblins too weak to travel long distances, etc.
Oct 21, 2022
To:ryba
Oh noo panic in the ranking list! 😂 Artifacts are definitely rad though!
Hopefully the next chapters will reveal some more of the truth, because all of these different accounts and not being able to trust them is so frustrating. I want to know what happened, damn it!
Don't place your favourite character bet just yet! My own favourite characters are actually some of the side characters that appear in a few episodes or so. Also, everyone's got multiple sides to them, I swear Joey's redeemable haha
The poor guy would for sure be getting back pain for days!!
Hm I doubt whether goblins were ever stupid in this world. How else would they have been able to push the dwarves out of their ancestral cities to begin with? Seems suspicious and biased to me...
I appreciate the insight in the dynamics between the lords. It's very interesting to see how they question each other and make plans to rebel against others. Though that'll not end well I believe.
And so the plot thickens. Dwarves really are a prideful bunch aren't they?
To:TheGrompFather
Honestly, if it were a different genre it probably wouldn't work, but your style fits its function very well! I can't see why people wouldn't like it!
He's got a rough journey ahead of him! I can tell you that much... 😥
Ah yes, arrogance and infighting, the best course of action in the middle of a war 🤨
Awesome writing style! I can totally see what you're going for Love how this is hinting at a tale of hubris
I'm excited, I haven't read a proper fantasy story in so long!
Oct 13, 2022
To:Makech
Our MC's gotta have some patience to get through that intimidating exterior!