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Giyuu

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About me .........Let's see......Just love to play football ..

registered at: Apr 08, 2023

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Apr 23, 2023

Yo.....👀

The Ghost with feelings

Chapter:7

Apr 13, 2023

To:Ayli

They banned my 5th account.....and my 4th was muted two days ago 😃

The Ghost with feelings

Chapter:3

Apr 13, 2023

To:Ayli

Me too......👀

The Ghost with feelings

Chapter:3

Apr 11, 2023

To:Ayli

Coffee ☕

The Ghost with feelings

Chapter:3

Apr 11, 2023

To:Ayli

Wait a sec.......did you think i was talking about you 😂😂😂

The Ghost with feelings

Chapter:3

Apr 11, 2023

To:Ayli

Because he was being annoying 👀

The Ghost with feelings

Chapter:3

Apr 10, 2023

Alright.........go to Wattpad and type Zontec and pick any book to read from the reading list........it will help you to increase your writing skills

The Ghost with feelings

Chapter:3

Apr 10, 2023

There's this thing called character bounding..........and you killed it

The Ghost with feelings

Chapter:3

Apr 10, 2023

Hey........the story is moving too fast 👀

The Ghost with feelings

Chapter:3

Apr 10, 2023

Don't worry........it's okay........just call me senpai or sensei......👀

The Ghost with feelings

Chapter:1

Apr 09, 2023

Try working hard and you will develop your writing skills as you get older.

The Ghost with feelings

Chapter:1

Apr 09, 2023

Yo...... I am back........ again 👀

Anyways........as always the plot of the story is good....
......but sentence formation, usage of punctuation and spelling errors..... correct these mistakes and the story will be a lot more enjoyable..........The third para is too long break it in many other parts..........readers don't enjoy reading long paragraphs.......... So try to make a paragraph short but not too short........

The Ghost with feelings

Chapter:1

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