Apr 09, 2023
Yo...... I am back........ again 👀
Anyways........as always the plot of the story is good....
......but sentence formation, usage of punctuation and spelling errors..... correct these mistakes and the story will be a lot more enjoyable..........The third para is too long break it in many other parts..........readers don't enjoy reading long paragraphs.......... So try to make a paragraph short but not too short........
