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I'm an aspiring author that loves anime, video games and Star Wars.
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Aug 01, 2023
It definitely felt odd transitioning from horror to slice of life, but I definitely am enjoying it, as this also created some tension between Adan and Eva! I wonder if Mara and Shad will make it work. And will Shad ever find out Mara's secret? Guess we'll have to wait and see!
Jul 30, 2023
To:Deleted User
I'll be lambasting that even more in the next chapter! hahaha
yeah I wanted to dip a little back into horror, but when I got the design for Mara, I was like, this is too scary and too cute to be an antagonist! So I'm thinking I'll do some slice of life shenanigans for a little bit as a consequence of Mara's arrival.
Jul 25, 2023
oh yeah definitely! I think I'm gonna wade a little bit back into the horror with the next chapter, as well as tease a twist I have planned for the story overall. :D
Jul 05, 2023
you're fine. I think I'll progress to more slice of life for now with My Morning Star, that way I'll be able to flesh out Havenwood as well as it's denizens.
lol it's alright.
To:jenz.tr
I'm glad to hear it! I hope you enjoy the other three chapters as well!
lol, they're blood brothers. Thank you!
Jun 29, 2023
Yup, there aren't any true robots. The Unimus are biomechanical entities.
I try not to be very explicit, but this is a story about someone who is not a good person.
wow, fast reader haha. Yeah, that's kind of the vibe I wanted to go for all of them! :D
ooh boy, sounds like you're going to be in for a doozy with these later chapters then, haha. :D
Lol I have next to no familiarity with Magic the Gathering so it was just from the ole' braincase. But thanks!
Jun 16, 2023
So I've changed the name of the town to Havenwood. That change takes place around chapter 2 or 3, but after I crank out a couple more chapters I will come back and fix the discrepancy.
To:XGrievousX25
thanks! I wanted to challenge myself with making something I was unfamiliar with, but still wanted to make authentic. it's always frustrating when the plot demands that characters act stupid to advance the plot. so I'm trying to avoid that.