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LisaLisa

Doctor in Computer Engineering based in Spain with a passion for writing.

I'm also a mother now so my time for leaving comments is limited :') So I will just drop as many likes as I can if I like a novel xDDD

You can check my other stories (fics) here: https://archiveofourown.org/users/Lisa_Lisa

registered at: May 26, 2023

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Sep 03, 2026

To:Soulwriter861

It was Finally time for a bit of gods lore and of course merman romance👩‍❤️‍👨
I'm happy you liked the arc 💕

The Dawn of the Wish Bearer

Chapter:25

Sep 03, 2026

I completely lost it at the "polishing the gemstone over wielding he scepter" xDDDDD Just for that the merchant gained points
TBH Cain threatening the merchant to help Solveig's self-esteem (and avoid an explosion) and also help her to have a nice dress was really cool 🌟
Also Cain also has to control his temper because he was about to lose it there and oof, maybe that would be problematic in the Academy.
Can't wait to read what dress Solveig has picked up (maybe the red one from the cover?👀)

Solveig the Great: I Defeated the Demon King, But If I Feel Insufficient I’ll Explode?!

Chapter:10

Sep 03, 2026

I'm an idiot and when hearing the term bug magic, I imagined a worm with a wizard hat and a wand. That wouldn't be very fearsome 🙈
"I really don't like the idea of exploring the mines in the dark" DEFINITELY NOT
🥲

Exiled — Rekindling the Flame

Chapter:16

Sep 03, 2026

Ok, I firstly left a crying reaction because OMG the first part of the chapter was so sad to read 😭😭😭 "Adults...weren't supposed to looks scared." Furielle's parents were SO BRAVE putting on a brave face for their daughter sake 💕💕
But the part that made me change the emoji like to hearts was Flint's. This boy is just so precious. The detail of the carved figurines was so attentive, he finally helped Furielle to accept the reality and have closure 😭
Aaaand Flint has his whole team assembled!! I'll be waiting for the character's illustrations to update hehehehe 💕

Undead Blade: The Crimson Gate & The Last Swordsman

Chapter:29

Sep 03, 2026

Ok, I've got questions: the people whose body Razzel inahibts are till 'alive' in a Limbo? Though the way Pecce, Gryffin and Seveg told him that 'live' sounded like something that an already dead person would say to prompt others to live 😭
I really liked how you wrote Seveg's past. As much as I was afraid of the character when Razzel was in Gryffins body, with his POV you made our perception changed and ow with all his past oooof he had it rough too 😭
Also congratulations on not faltering to kill people for the sake of the story: as someone who is terrible at writing tragedy I admire the courage xDDD

Re:Incarnation • The Hundred Faces of Razzel Od Mithril

Chapter:16

Sep 03, 2026

I liked the first part with Ameline 💕Gryffin was in such a depressed state after what happened to his wife and when his daughter was taken away that he didn't notice how much she cared about him 😭
Also Razzel my boy, he always takes the bad decissions. The fact that those people he helped are in danger because he chose not to kill is such a bad luck 😩
Oh and I swear that if something happens to Fufu I'll cry. She is an existence to protect with how adorable she is 💕
Also, I wonder in which body Razzle will end up next. Maybe Gryffin's daughter? Could it be that he ends up in the King's body? I honestly can't predict where this story is going and I like that hehehe

Re:Incarnation • The Hundred Faces of Razzel Od Mithril

Chapter:15

Sep 03, 2026

To:JT The Wolf

Indeed the plot twist would have been if the mission was carried out without incidents 😂

The Dawn of the Wish Bearer

Chapter:14

Sep 03, 2026

To:JT The Wolf

Yes, I had in mind both animal in the circus and the zoo. And nope, Nona was not going to allow Adish give up so easily hehe

The Dawn of the Wish Bearer

Chapter:13

Sep 02, 2026

To:Soulwriter861

Same😂🏝️💌🧜‍♂️

The Dawn of the Wish Bearer

Chapter:24

Sep 02, 2026

Such a satifying ending, with everyona Aya has met appearing as closure (Taliaa 💕).

I enjoyed this story quite a lot. Aya, Ami and Talia's backgrounds were my favorite. Even if I got a bit lost with some of the geography and politics, I admire the world building and all the names you made up. They all had a funny vibe, but at the same time it really felt as they were part of the same world, which is not easy to achieve.

The only thing I thought was a bit off for me was the last part with Pompi. Aya's past and resolution was so peak for me that later the sudden part of the Ararat felt like a DLC? Like, I know it's to close Pompi's story completely, but I think that could have been addressed before Samuel, so that Aya's confrontation was the very last important event to happen.

But asides from that, I really enjoyed reading this. You already know that I have a soft spot for Talia, but I really got fond of Aya, at first Ami got on my nerves but I came to like her very much too (Marianme as well, though she was even more at the end xDDD) and I finished reading this last chapter with a smile on my face 💕

Witch x Guard

Chapter:56

Sep 02, 2026

Ami calling Aya her hero and best friend 💕💕💕💕
She has evolved so much from the Ami of the first chapters that was so brusque and mean with Aya because she didn't trust her yet

Witch x Guard

Chapter:55

Sep 02, 2026

Honestly the fact that they didn't fight Pompi normally and used an homunculus to trick him was very enjoyable. It's like: we don't need to waste more energy with you, idiot. We're more clever than that 🤩

Witch x Guard

Chapter:54

Sep 02, 2026

To:Katsuhito

Aecorrailroadname xDDDD Yep, no love triangle in this story: Nona only has eyes for the hot merman 🌟
Thorny may have trouble admitting it but he's fond of Nona wanting it or not hehe 💕

The Dawn of the Wish Bearer

Chapter:24

Sep 01, 2026

To:obliviousbushtit

(nooo not a Mary Sue😭😂)
Tbh there was going to be a fight but the plot didn't listen and I had to postpone it🙈

The Dawn of the Wish Bearer

Chapter:10

Sep 01, 2026

I'm glad their plan worked and Flint managed to survive 🌟 Also the poor undead ringing the bell because he was calling for help when he was alive was sad...
...though not so sad like THAT ENDING 😭😭😭 Between this and Jonah's you're on a row to make your readers suffer 😩 Also it didn't help that I had wrongly thought hat Furielle's parents were maybe were some shitty nobles or something like that from whom she had decided to run away, but I wasn't expecting this 😭

Undead Blade: The Crimson Gate & The Last Swordsman

Chapter:28

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