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Jul 04, 2023

She hit that man for so much damage he started bugging out... This novel is one of the most professional-feeling ones I've read on this site. It really stands out in how it describes the flow of events occuring, everything is very smooth and well integrated.

Maniavolution

Chapter:2

Jul 04, 2023

Ayy free crystals tho, she sure as hell doesn't need them. Great first chapter, your experience is very evident in your writing.

Maniavolution

Chapter:1

Jun 29, 2023

Oh god they're too cute

On the run with a witch from another world

Chapter:12

Jun 29, 2023

To:Pernodi

Thanks! Romance isn't exactly my strong suit, (not that anything is, since this is my first novel), and I'm trying to show their relationship developing through stuff like that. Obligatory bath scene coming next chapter, so stay tuned!

What we Dream

Chapter:10

Jun 27, 2023

To:HVM

Rowan is not too good at thinking before acting.

What we Dream

Chapter:8

Jun 27, 2023

To:Pernodi

I hope you feel like the mystery aspect is working out okay, I feel like I'm not spending enough time on each thing before moving to the next one. Also, since I'm basically improvising almost the entire story, I'm worried that I might end up with some loose ends or discrepancies. I might have so do some rewriting on the early chapters once I get farther into the series.

What we Dream

Chapter:8

Jun 27, 2023

To:Pernodi

Lol thanks, I didn't mean to stop writing for so long but after I accidentally deleted almost all of the next chapter I had written, I lost some motivation. Also I had my Calculus and Physics finals, plus some other stuff. I'm back now though, and I'm going to try to post a chapter roughly every day of the week, except Saturday and sunday maybe.

What we Dream

Chapter:7

Jun 09, 2023

To:Pernodi

Lol yeah I'm definitely going to do some rewriting on this one, I wrote this right before I went to bed so I was rushing badly, I'm gonna restructure this chapter to make it less of a exposition dump. I have way more respect than I did before for authors who reveal information naturally instead of exposition, trying to provide information to the reader is way harder than I thought!

What we Dream

Chapter:6

Jun 08, 2023

To:Pernodi

Thank you so much man! I'll admit I feel a little inferior watching other novels in the contest rack up thousands of views, so it means a lot to me having you reading mine and liking it. I love your novel too by the way, it's very engaging!

What we Dream

Chapter:5

Jun 08, 2023

To:minatika

The details of Asher's home life aren't too relevant, I just wanted to get at least a little establishment of his life to let the audience understand why he doesn't really care about reality. I'm actually a completely new author as well, so thanks for your encouragement! It means a lot to me.

What we Dream

Chapter:0

Jun 06, 2023

Oliver sure is brave, I wouldn't dare risk pissing off badass witch-slayer grandma.

On the run with a witch from another world

Chapter:3

Jun 06, 2023

To:Pernodi

Thanks for the praise! I'll try to drop another couple chapters tomorrow. Also, thanks for pointing out the typo, I'm really bad at catching stuff like that.

What we Dream

Chapter:3

Jun 02, 2023

They're both 19 too, that's funny. I read your first two chapters and they're great, I love your characters! I'll have to check out your other works on here, looks like you have quite a bit of experience going into this contest.

What we Dream

Chapter:0

Jun 02, 2023

Lol this is great, I love Miss Workaholic's personality. It's nice to see that Clover cares about his mom a lot.

The Love of My Life, Miss Workaholic!

Chapter:1

Jun 02, 2023

Love the premise so far. Sick use of the painting for the cover art too.

On the run with a witch from another world

Chapter:1

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