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I write in erratic lengths and it's often a stream of consciousness than anything cohesive. Magical Realism? Yeah, I guess that's what I write.
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Jun 13, 2023
To:Kitsune
That's the plan! This was kind of also a stress test to see how people feel about time jumps back and forth. Do plan to stick to one timeline for much longer durations of time to develop the characters slowly.
To:Kya Hon
This is something I am very much worried about haha. I am absolutely planning to jump around less and do longer parts that stick to a smaller cast over multiple parts and flesh them out. I wanted to establish that time jumps will happen by going back after only 2 chapters. I am not quite sure yet structurally but it should get much easier to follow on a regular basis... I hope.
Noted! Dialogue is something I am always trying to improve because it's been one of my weak points for a while. Will try to keep that in mind.
Jun 12, 2023
To:Geta
ty ty I can't take full credit for it but I really fucking wanted to use this ever since my roomie said it lmao
Jun 11, 2023
FUCK you are right. This is what I get for posting chapters while half asleep. Thank you!
Jun 10, 2023
To:minatika
very much aware and acknowledge that! let's just say I have plans as to why this teacher is getting away with it... ;)
Jun 06, 2023
To:Bubbles
omg hi, thanks for reading!!
Noted. This used to be a fair bit longer but I trimmed a lot of the fat for word count reasons so it does feel a bit off in some places. Might revamp it to make it flow better. Also, thank you for checking it out!
