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I had a dream so lit I decided to write it into a chaotic story (WTRS). Feedback will always be welcomed!
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Jan 08, 2025
DAMN i had a feeling she was connected with the Aequitas but not this literally ๐ญ๐ญ i don't think shes a traitor tho, but i wonder if shes actually an escapee, considering that shes really nervous when the subject is about them ๐ค could that be her reason to join the knights then? to receive protection from the Aequitas? ๐
MY SOLDIERS SCREAM OUT! MY SOLDIERS RAGEE!! SHIN WO SASAGEY---wait wrong anime I MEAN AD TEMPUS, AD FUTURUM!!! ๐ค this is one hell of a battle and it barely started woooohh ๐ค๐ค Heres to hoping the squad pulls it off, but if they consider this war there's bound to be some deaths involved and im not ready for that ๐ sorry if I've been too pessimistic LMAO alt history is all about dark vibes so i gotta prepare myself for the worst at all times ๐ญ๐ญ
ahhh things are coming together now a little. Now i know White's goals, but i still don't know if Locri and Skyler are dead or alive since it went back and forth in these chapters, and my monke airhead brain cant see the clues. im not a science or a philosophy major in the slightest, so this is quite a mindfuck.
I second Kaze, Blackheart keeps spitting generic villain phrases and she had the audacity to call Autumn cliche ๐ญ You know shes the final boss (or at least a major one) when you cant respawn and the boss HAS A SECOND PHASEE ๐ญ๐ญ *dark souls music starts playing*
wait, so, Locri is... alive too? So theyre both alive again somehow? ๐ญ
Moukia became a Macho rat ๐ญ๐ญ๐ญ the best robot companion frfr he even calls Vanessa mum!! I think this is the first time ive seen a story with an actually friendly robot who doesnt have an attitude so this is nice to see
Jan 07, 2025
The way Yuna expressed those words makes me think she might actually realized Jiro's behind her death after all... And im betting that she would totally forgive him, giving that push Jiro needs to finally overcome his guilt ๐ค
To:Bakajanai69
I'm so glad you enjoyed the chapter! Itโs fantastic to hear that the mix of suspense and strategy came through, and I really appreciate your thoughts on the protagonistโs resourcefulness. The museum's hidden secrets and the pacing were definitely key elements I wanted to focus on to maintain tension. Iโm also thrilled you liked the internal dialogueโitโs always a balance between wit and determination. I can't wait for you to see what comes next, as there are some big twists ahead! Thanks for your insightful feedback!
another training montage ๐ค I like seeing how the gang interacts with other people, and i also like how there isnt really any serious rivalry or drama, just pals sparring, which is good too see especially since theyre all responsible for maintaining world stability ๐๐
ohhh boy i can definitely tell we're heading to the final arc now that everyone knows what the Aequitas want. We still dont know much other than that but at least we know their goals. now to wonder how they'll plan to stop them ๐ค
Jan 06, 2025
totally relatable, i also hate washing dishes
Thank god Liriana pulled it off!! and im so glad Dax survived like damn i expected the worst ๐ญ๐ญ thank god it didn't end tragically... And i also didn't expect the knights would actually accept a child into their ranks either. but i do know shes the safest there, just hoping she wont actually do any hard labor ๐
Heres to hoping that Liriana can save Dax!! Speaking of Dax tho I was so nervous he was gonna lose but nope, bros beaten him with his own strength!! (and that jammer too, but Reid was already cheating with chrono tech so its now even) ๐ It was so sad hearing him say all that tho, i can tell they used to be so close ๐ญ friends to enemies are always heartwrenching MAN ๐ญ๐ญ
To:Katsuhito
alwasy a pleasure to read your work ๐ค
I love how you also have an airborne fight here too (but even more chaotic) ๐๐ Blackheart calls Autumn cliche when she calls her minions pets and is a dark-themed witch, exactly looking like what you would expect a villain should look like... jokes aside tho i honestly love her attitude more ๐