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I had a dream so lit I decided to write it into a chaotic story (WTRS). Feedback will always be welcomed!

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Dec 16, 2024

Woah, things are getting even weirder. Now time is getting funky? I originally thought that whatever happened in the last chapters could be them slipping into a parallel world and inherited memories of themselves in that world which explains the contradicting memories, but that crime happening after the news article is really unusual. Its like the world is a few hours ahead of the characters, but idk it seems like it. Thats just an observation I made, im too dum to have any theories yet 🤔

Parallel in Two

Chapter:5

Dec 16, 2024

No way, ad breaks are still a thing?? Actually a dystopia 😭😭😭

Im glad everyone's okay tho, and everyone has a chance to take a breather before they arrive at the next destination. Cant wait to see Autumn again and learn more secrets. Also is it weird that i also wanna see the director too? Not looking forward to more gaslighting, but I do still wanna hear explanations from his pov 🤔

Memoria

Chapter:21

Dec 16, 2024

To:ArufaBeta

Radio's dark background can explain his violent behavior but not his actions, like a victim who's had enough, snapped, and stopped caring kind of way. That mindset is what the Director wants to take advantage of 😭 But now that Radio failed his assassination, maybe that might ironically lead him to the right path!

Phantom Frequency

Chapter:5

Dec 16, 2024

To:ArufaBeta

This is barely chapter 4, so there will definitely be some room for character development/growth! (The list of chapter titles might've given that away lmao) For now, we're seeing what most people see Radio: a menace 💀

Phantom Frequency

Chapter:4

Dec 15, 2024

Ok make that 4 people going through this. I saw your reply down in the comments- so that handshake wasn’t behind it? It was just a massive coincidence then? Then Im curious to know what actually happened… Quite a big mystery here and i dig it!

Parallel in Two

Chapter:4

Dec 15, 2024

Schizophrenia going crazy 😭 Now theres even more questions piling up. This oddly reminds me of the Mandela effect but like for 2 people (as of now?)… Now i dont know whats real or not. Was the Schrodinger’s Cat example foreshadowing this perhaps? 🤔

Parallel in Two

Chapter:3

Dec 15, 2024

To:Kitsune

Now we finally learned about what happened to Celia and its not good at all 💀 The Director did lay out a trap alright, one that no one saw coming…

Phantom Frequency

Chapter:18

Dec 15, 2024

Okay, now the chapter title makes sense. I was wondering what would be "part 2" but it's just a pov switch. Interesting to see Marsia's innocent pov, and I totally get her wishes to see the world. Honestly tho as much as the world's nice there's probably so much danger, especially for someone like her (an idol, maybe? not sure), which is probably why she's so sheltered 🤔

Seeing that trippy moment again in her pov makes me believe that it's not quite a hallucination or a drug trip tho... unless its some crazy scifi drug that makes people think the world just got distorted. Very intriguing 🤔

Parallel in Two

Chapter:2

Dec 15, 2024

My finals are all done and im finally free to start adding more books to my reading list. Right off the bat I'm noticing something from your synopsis- some letters are capitalized? "AUBRN"? 🤔

Also, I like how you also got a nice action sequence for your first chapter. Nice brief showcase of the world. The Overside and Underside sounds like the classic rich overworld/poor underground world and im quite interested in seeing some parallels (pun intended)

That strange hallucination during that handshake moment tripped me out (in an intriguing way) and now im wondering if thats going to be a frequent thing, especially the mention of Schrodinger's Cat hinting about 2 things happening at once 🤔 Great start, tho! Im liking this so far!

Parallel in Two

Chapter:1

Dec 15, 2024

To:Katsuhito

i just realized i misspelled auction as action 😭

Chrono Knight

Chapter:18

Dec 15, 2024

To:Katsuhito

Detective Katsu on full clue solving mode i see 👀 Axel would be proud!! Noah has the right to learn about his mom after going through all that shit mannn...
Also, I've tweaked a bit on that part. Just wanted to clarify that they want Noah just because he's Celia's kid and it'd be a waste to get rid of him...
Axel be expecting an ambush and he was right 💀💀

Phantom Frequency

Chapter:18

Dec 15, 2024

Infiltration success!! I dig the mask choices (and the subtle symbolisms behind them) and I think having Dax be part of the infiltration team is a good move. Bro doesnt need a weapon to fight when things go south 😤 Time to finally see whats so special about this action!! gonna be real im so hyped to see it!!

Chrono Knight

Chapter:18

Dec 15, 2024

Yesss Haru gets a second chance!! Praying he and his mom can safely escape this hellhole!! But Shiba tho DAMN he gets to prove his use again!! I had expected Hideo had an abusive past but Yuna's there??? Whats girl doing there 😭

Drifting on Blue Tides

Chapter:16

Dec 15, 2024

To:Eyrith

Thanks for checking it out!!! And im happy to hear you like it!

Phantom Frequency

Chapter:1

Dec 15, 2024

To:Hype

Thanks for reading! Lol im glad you enjoyed too!

Phantom Frequency

Chapter:1

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