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Sakura Mazaki

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Author, artist, gamer, and anime lover from Ontario, Canada.

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registered at: Jun 15, 2023

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Dec 02, 2025

Poor Jun 😱

Ugh, acting like she's the one that owes it. 😣

Small fix (subject-verb match: hands plural): her hands did not cease 'their trembling.'

The Spotlight's Shadow

Chapter:27

Dec 01, 2025

🤣🤣

Love at First Fight

Chapter:13

Dec 01, 2025

confident I won't poison you 🤣

Damn, they got to him fast. 😱

Super minor suggestion: “Out of your twenty-six years of living… you’ve never cooked before?” (Just a little smoother with one ellipsis here)

The Spotlight's Shadow

Chapter:26

Dec 01, 2025

To:kcayu

Thank you! ❤️

Yeah, I hate when I don't write something down and can't remember later, even if I thought it was a great idea 😣

Yeah, someone's definitely got their eye on her D=

Spotlight

Chapter:15

Nov 29, 2025

Don't let the panda bite~

My Peaceful Life as Bloody Twilight is GONE!

Chapter:16

Nov 29, 2025

Yeah, poor Ren 😞 It's tough to take, but he's not one to give up easily.

Spotlight

Chapter:13

Nov 28, 2025

To:T.Goose

It definitely came across, but still harsh on her side. Poor idiot.

lol Technically, they already have, but it would have a different meaning now

Love at First Fight

Chapter:10

Nov 27, 2025

Ouch, a bit harsh there. Hard to say if 'all' of them were that way, though.

Love at First Fight

Chapter:10

Nov 27, 2025

He's an actual prince them 🤔

My Peaceful Life as Bloody Twilight is GONE!

Chapter:14

Nov 27, 2025

Not a good rabbit hole to go down, Akari. 😣 But she definitely noticed her feelings there! 🤭

Small note: The silence 'tempted' something...
Before she could react, (comma vs semi-colon)

The Spotlight's Shadow

Chapter:25

Nov 27, 2025

To:kcayu

Shun wants to keep everything balanced, really. He wants to keep Misa safe, doesn't want Ren pushing too much, and wants to get work done without any chaos.

Spotlight

Chapter:14

Nov 27, 2025

To:kcayu

Emotions all of the place here. Poor Ren didn't mean any harm 😣

Spotlight

Chapter:13

Nov 24, 2025

Aw, he was so close to reaching out to her 🤭

Comma splice (I can ignore these if you'd prefer): Akari slid the door open from her private onsen, her robe 'clinging' lightly to her shoulders, hair damp and loose, cheeks still flushed from the heat. (Or you can split it into two sentences).

Small typo: 'night's glow'

The Spotlight's Shadow

Chapter:24

Nov 24, 2025

To:kcayu

Comma splices get a lot of us. I've made the mistake plenty of times (and probably still do) but I'm a bit better than I used to be with them xD

The Spotlight's Shadow

Chapter:23

Nov 23, 2025

He's been paying close attention to her for a while now~😍 And maybe he's finally admitting to himself how he feels? 🤭 Cute chapter.

Missing word: All she could 'do' was just stare.

Small grammar notes (comma splices): Akari awoke slowly, lying curled up in the futon…
He lay awkwardly on his back, exhaustion from his injury painfully obvious.

The Spotlight's Shadow

Chapter:23

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