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Author, artist, gamer, and anime lover from Ontario, Canada.
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Nov 22, 2025
Just a little stubborn... >.>
And of course Michi did it on purpose 🤣🤣
Small phrasing note: “You’re one to talk, though.” (The 'not' would change the meaning).
To:kcayu
Ren got into her head with the word 'date' so she can't help but think it 😆
Nov 21, 2025
Michi definitely did it on purpose 🤣
I know them well myself 😖
Nov 20, 2025
🤣🤣
She's probably been too busy keeping her mask up to notice anyone there cared. 😣
Minor grammar notes (comma splices): Her main makeup artist, Kei, wiped at her eyes, her own makeup 'starting' to run.
Jun exhaled softly, his arm 'resting' stiffly on the wheel as he tried to ease the pain in his side.
To:TheLeanna_M
😣 Yes, her manager was quite horrible. She deserves better.
Nov 19, 2025
Yup, I know it all too well. 😣
To:otkrlj
Song definitely suits the moment for her. And now the song's stuck in my head xD
Thank you!
Yup, it definitely got to her 😆
Thanks for catching that! I remember that mistake, and I swear I had fixed it. xD
Knife wounds are no joke. Hope he's okay. She might be a target fully outing them like that. Nice tension building~
Minor note: Jun noticing the metallic object is described twice. You might be able to merge the details for a smoother, tighter progression.
Nov 18, 2025
Aw, mentioning the smile is a quick way to make it vanish for some people. Wait, what?! He's surprised she's a she? xD And hidden paparazzi in the middle of nowhere? I have a feeling Oto has a lot to learn. 🤣
Tiny note: “coughed its last breath” and “came to a final rest” express the same idea, so trimming one could make the sentence flow more smoothly.
Small typo: You sure you're not going to 'keel' over?
Nothing wrong with a Chun-Li main 😆
😭 Poor Akari, bittersweet dream. At least she wasn't alone after.
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