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Author, artist, gamer, and anime lover from Ontario, Canada.
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Nov 17, 2025
I don't think poor people go off a train like that every day xD She's going to keep increasing it at this rate. 😂
He should at least know his home phone number...
She definitely needed to run into Jun for support! And he's right about getting it out there. 😣
Small typo: Her hands 'tightened' in her lap. Comma instead of period: And even if they try to expose anything after that, the public will side more with you.
Nov 16, 2025
The one time he takes a train, this happens. 😱
Small typo: 'His eyes opened wide as,' — I assume you meant 'wide, and…'
Small wording suggestion (if you're open to them): ‘stood to his feet’ could be replaced with ‘stood up’ or ‘got to his feet’ for smoother flow.
We can be rogue ninjas! 🤣
Knight in shining armour~ Had to take out quite a few people to get to her, but he made it.
To:kcayu
❤️ Glad you're enjoying it!
To:TheLeanna_M
He definitely had other things in mind! ❤️
Thanks!
Yup, dessert replacing breakfast so it's not extra. I've done that before🤤
Nov 14, 2025
Of course he sold her out with ease. 😖
Nov 13, 2025
Back to the spotlight~
Small typo: If you end up in enemy territory then don't do anything to put 'yourself' in further danger.
Nov 12, 2025
Kitchen hazard 🤭
Nov 11, 2025
That was risky @_@
❤️
Nov 10, 2025
Underground gambling... Still feels like it'll link back to the father. 🤔
Minor suggestion: you could combine 'The drive was silent.' with the next sentence to avoid repeating 'drive'.
Missing word: her 'hair' pulled back neatly
Minor tense issue: ‘hiding’ should be ‘hid’ to match masked.