Aug 16, 2023
While I may not consider myself an expert and haven't read an extensive number of novels for critique, I find there isn't much I can elaborate on regarding this chapter. The prologue establishes a solid premise with an intriguing blend of fantasy elements and a protagonist's ordinary life. There's room for improvement in terms of character depth and dialogue flow, but the chapter successfully introduces the main character, setting, and the mysterious turn of events at the end, creating anticipation for what's to come. With some refinement, it could become an engaging start to the story. It seems to embody its title well. I'm hoping for more vivid imagery and a departure from the clichés I'm expecting. Nevertheless, the writing holds promise, and I'm looking forward to further developments. Thank you.
