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If Isekai were real, I'd be reincarnated as Lelouch in Jojo's Bizzare Adventure.

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Aug 14, 2023

Once MC communes with trees, I expect we'll get some tree becoming a new love interest in the story. That would be the dumbest yet funniest thing.

In any case, I'm still in shock over how intriguing the simplicity of this story can be. In some sense, it is giving me more and more Spy X Family vibes lately, perhaps because of the numerous character connections and hidden identities.

With a Love Sorceress I'll Make My Romance Last!

Chapter:13

Aug 14, 2023

Where do I even start... now as if the love interests weren't confusing enough, not only does MC has a rival, but our dear Madam Claire might have a rival sorcerer as well, guiding Toren against the best interest of our MC.

I'll bet on:
- Roku x Claire
- Toren x The rival sorceress
- Mia DIES ALONE!

With a Love Sorceress I'll Make My Romance Last!

Chapter:12

Aug 14, 2023

Claire getting sleepless nights because of her clients reminds me of my days as a freelancer 😪 I wonder if the MC is her only client because if there are other clients, I wonder how she even keeps up.

Anyway, if this were a Visual Novel, Toren would likely be the "True Ending"
😂 Makes you forget about Claire and Mia altogether. In any case, this story is unfolding pretty wildly so far; I'm not seeing it ending anytime soon

With a Love Sorceress I'll Make My Romance Last!

Chapter:11

Aug 14, 2023

"shout out an attack name to test the theory" - OMG 🤣

I'm not sure what happened in that bar, I was expecting some action-packed scenes, but ended up unable to stop laughing 🤣

With a Love Sorceress I'll Make My Romance Last!

Chapter:10

Aug 14, 2023

"Comic relief"-chan and her mother are such a pain 😂

On most novels I'm reading on this platform, I'd have long complained about the lack of action, and yet here you are, making even the most simple moments captivating. But honestly, now, this feels more slice-of-life than any other genre you've added (not that I would complain, this would be one of the few slice-of-life stories I enjoy). This story does deserve an anime adaptation.

PS: what does "sagely moronic" even mean 😆 (no, please don't explain, it's a rhetorical question)

PS 2: Madam Claire is a money-making machine... this could have been a novel in its own right 😅

With a Love Sorceress I'll Make My Romance Last!

Chapter:9

Aug 14, 2023

I find it so funny that the brother cursed in 2 languages during a crisis, but I assume there is a place where people do that. Also, how does 179.9cm - 177cm get to be 3 inches? The characters are still vaguely built into my mind at this point; I can only tell they are very different from each other, making me expect a contrasting dynamic, yet based on trust and loyalty. It reminds me of the leading trio in Promised Neverland.

Mirage Mansion

Chapter:2

Aug 14, 2023

Quite catchy so far, good intro, and the scary note is nicely intertwined with the funny (tickling) and the sad (crying for the deceased granny). I find the present tense a bit annoying and unusual for this kind of novel.

At this point in the story, I have no idea what could happen next, so let's see 😆 But I think it would have been an opportunity to introduce the brother in a bit more detail

Mirage Mansion

Chapter:1

Aug 14, 2023

Nice to see Nana so early into the story. I thought I'd have to go through the entire novel till we met her. Or is it a trap? 🤔 Feels fishy that he's only allowed to talk to her for such a short time.

The dialogue of our girl feels so complex it's hard to believe she's just 9yo, lol. I also don't get why it's a call, but then it's email later on.

Did this chapter lose the spacing between paragraphs for some reason?

Interwinted Hearts: Rise of Amoralia

Chapter:4

Aug 14, 2023

"magic and potions" - steroids without side effects, lol.

Sometimes "telling" instead of "showing" is a bit of a turn-off for me as a reader, for example, calling Olivia jealous as a narrator instead of letting me imagine it based on the action. Also, too much emphasis on that might make the character uni-dimensional.

What Clichés has this World Wrought? [ Volume One: Another World ]

Chapter:5

Aug 14, 2023

To:Mirai Kirishima

Makes sense. Also, don't mind my rhetorical questions. I wouldn't want you to answer them either. I just dropped them here for posterity, lol 😆

Interwinted Hearts: Rise of Amoralia

Chapter:3

Aug 14, 2023

"Still need how to learn how" - 2 hows - I usually use Grammarly or something similar to avoid wasting time finding typos in my writing.

The storytelling is nice and catchy as always, but it still makes me read diagonally since some explanations are a bit over-detailed and don't add anything to the story. But it's funny seeing those kids getting bored to death at the magic lecture 😆

What Clichés has this World Wrought? [ Volume One: Another World ]

Chapter:4

Aug 14, 2023

It feels strange to see how most people, except MC and his friend, didn't care about them being thrown into a new world. The knight seems like an honorable guy, but is he indeed? In any case, things seem to get tough for the kids sooner than I expect.

So far, pretty captivating story. I hope to see more action or character development in the following chapters.

If you have time, feel free to check my story since it has similar topics (real-world consequences and a bit of a cruel theme), which is why I'd love to hear your thoughts

What Clichés has this World Wrought? [ Volume One: Another World ]

Chapter:3

Aug 14, 2023

The more we dive into the story, the more unpredictable and mysterious it becomes. Our MC's evolution is also very captivating to follow. Many people struggle with not knowing what others are feeling, so it's a good lesson for them to read. I'm now starting to question, though: Why is MC even in love with Mia? If he turns from the extreme where he did HAD to the extreme, he becomes a pleaser, is their relationship going to be any better?

With a Love Sorceress I'll Make My Romance Last!

Chapter:8

Aug 14, 2023

I'm curious how they shared silly things from their lives if the MC never lived an elven childhood 😆 Anyway, great story so far. The date was ruined, but the relationship goes on

With a Love Sorceress I'll Make My Romance Last!

Chapter:7

Aug 14, 2023

When nature calls, one must go behind a tree, I guess 😆

Having a "pokedex" for a loved one's language is the most original idea I've seen in a while. Claire is a true men's love coach.

Mia turns out to be a reasonable person after all. Until now I was getting Mami from Rent a Girlfriend vibes from her, buuuut I was wrong. Thanks Coach Claire 😆

With a Love Sorceress I'll Make My Romance Last!

Chapter:6

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