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SUZU writes shoujo and josei fiction, mostly based in the modern day or near future. She loves magical girls.
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Jul 20, 2023
Never see her again ehhhhh >.> lol nice start
Interesting start. I know you mentioned wanting to edit in the author's note and I'd recommend breaking up some of the larger paragraphs in the beginning. Just a thought. Well done!
To:Deleted User
No need to be sorry. I like feedback like this because it helps make my writing better and clearer. :D
To:chibiandreea
True! He will have to work hard to understand her but I think he's up to the challenge.
Thanks! I wish I was musically inclined so I could make something. For now we will just have to imagine...
Thank you!
:o i thought the penguin suit was like a mascot... oh dear I hope they don't recognize him
This chapter was gold!
I need a Pingin plushie nowwww! So sweet
Awe! This made me miss conventions so badly! You should definitely write more LNs of all the animes you reference. The Katsuhito cinematic universe! :D
To:kazesenken
you just won the internet, congrats! LMAO
I love their interactions! Haruhi and Ichika are definitely meant to be, even if they don't know it yet
Does dad work for the CIA? lol well done. I'm sure they can keep up the illusion!
I love her POV and that she's standing up to her dad (in her own way, I guess). Excellent work :)
You should write a spin off novel about his dad - I'd love to see a cosplay weather man!
