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Nov 26, 2023

To:K-J-Whitten

It's great that you enjoyed it! I'm happy that my intentions to tell a wholesome story were understood. I hope you continue to appreciate the development of the plot, as there are many interesting moments ahead :D

The Sound of Love

Chapter:1

Nov 17, 2023

To:Massi

It's not always that simple 😆

The Sound of Love

Chapter:1

Nov 15, 2023

To:Polymorphe

I started reading some stories before writing, and I noticed that many narratives leaned toward the negative side.

I believe not everything needs to be taken in that direction, and while I wanted to build a reflective moment, I think in this case there's not a right or wrong, but rather a search for balance.

I'm unsure if I achieved my goals with the story, but I liked the result.

I'm glad you found it interesting, and thank you for reading.

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Chapter:1

Nov 06, 2023

To:Funsui

Heyyy Funsui,

I decided to try some new things with this one, and I'm really glad that you liked it.

Thank you so much for reading it, and for the positive energy. I'm happy to have the opportunity to be a finalist! ❤️

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Chapter:1

Nov 06, 2023

There is beauty in how things are simple as well. I felt that your story, as down-to-earth and tangible as it may seem, carries an immense amount of details and profound meanings. It makes me pause and reflect on various things at the same time.

What brings you here?

Chapter:1

Nov 05, 2023

To:minatika

To be honest, I find the contest's theme to be quite delicate, and I've been thinking a lot about whether to participate or not. In the end, I found an alternative that would avoid addressing this subject directly. Partly because I don't have enough knowledge to handle the topic in the way I would consider correct, and also because I wanted to explore things from a different perspective.

I believe that my story might have deviated from the main theme, but either way, it was a good exercise for me to practice and try out new things.

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Chapter:1

Nov 03, 2023

It's noticeable the various meanings and emotions that each word conveys in this story.
I really enjoyed what you wrote. In its own way, it's a beautiful narrative.

My Dearest Love, and My Greatest Enemy

Chapter:1

Nov 01, 2023

To:Hungry Sheep

I wrote this story with the heartwarming and wholesome development of two high school students in mind, who gradually, through their moments together, embark on a journey of learning and self-discovery.

The story does have some more delicate moments, but for the most part, I tried to convey a light and charming atmosphere.

I invite you to read a little more. I believe you might enjoy some aspects of it. 🙂

As for the cover, I'm glad you liked it. I work as a designer, so your compliment means a lot to me.

The Sound of Love

Chapter:1

Oct 30, 2023

To:Funsui

Thank you so much, Funsui, for taking the time to congratulate me. To be completely honest, I'm still in a bit of shock about making it to this stage. While I had hoped for it, it felt like a distant dream. Being among so many inspiring works is truly a joy.

I want to express my heartfelt gratitude for your support throughout this journey. Having readers like you alongside me in every chapter kept me going until the very end.

I genuinely appreciate it.

The Sound of Love

Chapter:23

Sep 01, 2023

To:minatika

Thank you, minatika!

First of all, I want to mention that I've read all your recent comments, but I'll focus my response on this latest one.

While I read your thoughts on each chapter, you brought a smile to my face seeing your reactions. I believe that writing, beyond being a means of expression, is also about sharing these moments of joy with others.

I'm delighted that you had a positive experience reading, despite the various rookie mistakes I might have made. I'm genuinely pleased that, in the end, I was able to provide some enjoyable moments.

Rest assured, if you were to meet this group, they would extend the warmest of welcomes. Your captivating and fantastic energy would be a blessing to have around.

Thank you so much for sticking with the story until the end. I truly appreciate it.

The Sound of Love

Chapter:23

Sep 01, 2023

To:Funsui

Yaaay, I did it! 😆

I thought it made more sense for them to open a store together rather than having a dream that seemed so distant, like forming a famous band. My main goal was always to focus on the bonds of friendship among everyone, rather than chasing grand success.

I'm really happy you enjoyed it, and that the reading experience was pleasant. I put in a lot of effort to keep the atmosphere relaxed, so I'm thrilled that it worked out.

Thank you for sticking with the story until the end. Since it's my first serious attempt at writing, I know there may be some errors that could have affected the experience, but I appreciate you taking the time to read it.

Now, I'm eager to read the final chapters of your novel as well, although I'm a bit sad to think it's a fantastic story that has come to a close.

In any case, my heartfelt thanks.

The Sound of Love

Chapter:23

Aug 31, 2023

And so the story has come to an end, what a journey it has been. With highs and lows, moments of joy and moments of sadness. I have to admit, I was a bit anxious at the thought that Mia and Toren might forget about Roki after all they went through together, but luckily, that wasn't the case.

I had so much fun reading your story, each chapter had its own unique charm, and the storytelling flowed so smoothly that I didn't even notice time passing. Your narrative was truly heartwarming and enchanting, and now I feel a bit melancholic knowing it's come to an end.

But I want to express my gratitude for having been a part of this journey and seeing it through to the end. Thank you for crafting something so engaging and lighthearted, it's been an incredible experience.

With a Love Sorceress I'll Make My Romance Last!

Chapter:40

Aug 31, 2023

To:Funsui

And now a new journey begins for them.
We still have one more chapter to go. An epilogue to give us a sneak peek of what's to come in the future.

The Sound of Love

Chapter:22

Aug 29, 2023

To:Funsui

Now they'll be able to do something together, combining the things they enjoy the most. And they still have some time to save up a bit of money until the end of school. 😊

The Sound of Love

Chapter:20

Aug 28, 2023

To:Funsui

Thank you for reading, Funsui.

It didn't go exactly as I had planned at the beginning, but I think due to how things unfolded, I had to make some adaptations. I believe it turned out even better than what I had initially expected.

I also wanted to create something to celebrate the journey of everyone, something that could illustrate the bond that unites them. And to be honest, I would like a bit more time to refine some things, but we have to work with what we have.😆

The Sound of Love

Chapter:19

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