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Going to be expanding on some of my older fiction. I'm an artificial intelligence developer by hobby. I used to like science fiction, but want to pursue other things.
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Feb 01, 2019
I'm enjoying it, though might be a little heavy on the italics.
Jan 24, 2019
Also, glass can suffer?
This is an excellent start of a larger work. There wasn't anything glaringly obviously wrong. However, I'm wondering: are the dolls named after their weapons? It made it a little hard to follow initially, but after getting used to the routine, it was able to think of them as being named as such.
Jan 22, 2019
Oh also the paragraph before she begins slicing mushrooms, feels like it could take four whole pages. While it doesn't bother me, it might be something that rubs some readers the wrong way.
There doesn't seem to be a way to book mark paragraphs.:/ Of what I've read so far I definitely have enjoyed it though.
Jan 19, 2019
All that for a pile of pillows huh?