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Nov 10, 2025

To:Bubbles

Ah, well, there are certainly things left unanswered, but I thought that it would serve as a nice point where a 'volume 1' would end, dealing with the immediate threat and solving the short term goal, while digging deeper into the world (and beyond).
There is a full story loosely planned out; those dangling plot threads are all intended to be tied up in the greater narrative. I am sorry though if you are disappointed though that it did not answer all of the questions so far 😅
(There is a little dream sequence epilogue that gives a bit more of a stinger 😆)

Thank you so much reading (and liking and commenting), it means a lot, and I hope you enjoyed it at least a little ❤️

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Chapter:45

Nov 10, 2025

To:Bubbles

You are very right. My writing sometimes comes out as very... procedural when I'm not trying to do that. It's something I am trying to work on.

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Chapter:38

Nov 10, 2025

To:Bubbles

ah, sorry for the confusion. It’s Ren (Hikaru) wondering how, given that elves seem to be closely tied to this other race in a different dimension, how humans on earth knew of them.
I probably should have made it clearer; can’t edit it now though, unfortunately 😅

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Chapter:32

Nov 10, 2025

To:Bubbles

hahaha, I’m actually happy you got that reference; yes, her neutral area is modeled after Echidna’s dreamscape, because it’s such a mood, and also I think fits her mixed personality since she’s originally an e******.

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Chapter:30

Nov 10, 2025

To:Bubbles

Clever naming is not my strongest suite 😅

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Chapter:29

Nov 10, 2025

To:Bubbles

ah, been a while since I’ve played that 😆👍

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Chapter:12

Nov 08, 2025

To:Bubbles

Not quite sure what you mean here; that it was still Ren that killed her?

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Chapter:12

Nov 08, 2025

To:Bubbles

hmm, yes and no?
I’m used to writing longer (~3.5-7k) chapters, so that comes more naturally, and it was a (beneficial) exercise to work on shorter chapters (even if some got a bit longer than 1.5k 😅). But no, other than a couple instances where I played with the length, they weren’t long chapters that I cut in half just to fit the recommended size. Rather I tried to work with the approximate size and structure the sequences within that length, and some cliffhangers were placed intentionally, not just longer chapters halved later. Plus, the length gave me a nice size for the dream chapters where they could be a whole chapter without feeling drawn out/bloated or interrupted halfway.

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Chapter:11

Nov 08, 2025

To:Bubbles

oh hey, welcome back 😊
heh, yeah, it comes up later… it is very important, but more in an overall context than an immediate sense (other than driving his initial curiousity towards magic).

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Chapter:9

Oct 17, 2025

To:Ashley

thank you so much for reading!! and glad you liked the villain; he was tricky to write because I tried not to make him a stereotypical antagonist 😆😅

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Chapter:46

Oct 17, 2025

To:Ashley

this do be is *badass* scene (because we haven’t gotten to see him flex yet) 😆

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Chapter:39

Oct 17, 2025

To:Ashley

Thank you! Glad to hear you’re enjoying it and like him! 🥰

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Chapter:26

Sep 30, 2025

To:Bubbles

I, uh, appreciate the likes and the feedback, but I don't know how to respond to this, other than that it's not that kind of story... 😅

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Chapter:4

Sep 28, 2025

To:CatEatsRat

For sure! You have a day still to edit it (disqualified if edited after the 29th, according to the rules). Sorry to leave it as a review; I really wish this site had messaging 😅

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Chapter:0

Sep 11, 2025

To:Nova Starx

Thank you very much for your kind words and for reading this 🥰
I'm glad you enjoyed this chapter (I was struggling to try and make it hit home).
Thank you for reading so far. I look forward to the results of this breakthrough between the two main characters as I dig into writing the final main part.

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Chapter:25