Oct 28, 2024
To:lolitroy
I stood on the lawn, headed up. Today the sky is so clear, birds flown, their shadows cast on the floor, moved happily. I pressed my hand together ๐ and said, โThank you, sir!โ
Thank you so much, you comment teach me a lot ๐ So that mean [. ! ?] These three sisters have a power to change next letter to a big capital boy. Even this [ " ] little twin teeth can hold the sistersโ power. ๐ฏโโ๏ธ
For the POV and present or past tense. These are so hard for me ๐, I will try to correct and re-write it again (I re-read it, their so many ๐๐๐) If you have free-kind time, I have some questions, There is possible that I write in past-tense but character talk-within self with present tense, (This one is so complicate for me) and possibly that I write in third POV but swiftly change first POV when character talk-within self. (like as a manga-character often has inner talk.)
Iโm really Thank you.
