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Apr 14, 2025

To:Lihinel

Yeah, that whole backstory of Grace was a pretty hard sell, wasn't it? 😂

Grace Moves Mountains

Chapter:5

Apr 12, 2025

Sionn might as well commit kidnapping to resolve his social ineptness. Hunters and hostages? I bet he tells that to all the girls.

if the moon forgets to smile

Chapter:3

Apr 12, 2025

Nice, next time I'll try cheek squeezing to help with negotiations. 🤠

if the moon forgets to smile

Chapter:2

Apr 12, 2025

Waiting for another order of choccy milk, so that she can say, "Guess you should've adventured harder."

Too bad the extra calcium doesn't replace lost bones.

if the moon forgets to smile

Chapter:1

Apr 12, 2025

Subtitles please. 😂

This story is cute, but I can't help but wonder what kind of internet service provider can connect earth and elven realms, and how much of a surcharge that would be. 😆

Love in Translation: I was Summoned to Another World by A Cute Elf Girl, but I don’t Speak her Language?!

Chapter:2

Apr 12, 2025

Those strange magic circles, always appearing when you least suspect them.

This type of 'background protagonist' is used pretty often in these kinds of stories, but I think you are doing a pretty good job at making what should be bland characteristics into something meaningful.

Love in Translation: I was Summoned to Another World by A Cute Elf Girl, but I don’t Speak her Language?!

Chapter:1

Apr 12, 2025

If you can't beat them, join them. Perfect time to pull off the iconic Van Damme kitchen counter split kick... what do you mean you can't? Skill issue. 😉

Between Backflips & Paperclips

Chapter:2

Apr 11, 2025

This is like isekai MC level of progress, lol.
The feeling of logging back into a game and you forgot that everything you started had been built in your absence. 😂

Tinker, Tailor, Tyrant, Traitor, Husband… Mine?!

Chapter:2

Apr 11, 2025

Hey look, a story with a point to the amnesia right away. 😂

Good start and interesting buildup of Elisa grasping her surroundings until the ball dropped.

One question... 19+5 = 23?

Tinker, Tailor, Tyrant, Traitor, Husband… Mine?!

Chapter:1

Apr 11, 2025

Yo, shirts off and not even met in person yet. 😂

Black & White: Spirits, Love, and Traditions

Chapter:2

Apr 11, 2025

I get the intent here of trying to hook the reader with a relatable MC and then a female lead with a interesting (but rather suddenly introduced backstory).
It serves the purpose of marking down right away how your story will be different, but at the same time, I can't ignore the disconnect it forms with jumping from a sweet encounter online to 'death and youkai'. It feels like you should've have focused on one or the other. I actually prefer the latter, as it reads less like a summary of events.
Starting with the youkai backstory and having her look at her phone in anticipation of his arrival to counter the tragedy. And then, the reader finding out who this source of relief is, would feel like less of a mid chapter 'surprise!' for the sake of it.

Black & White: Spirits, Love, and Traditions

Chapter:1

Apr 10, 2025

To:Lihinel

One unconscious dude. I think the forecast for a dream fairy is pretty likely. 😎

Grace Moves Mountains

Chapter:3

Apr 10, 2025

I heard of people rolling on the ground to celebrate a new living space, but grabbing the first high thing to hang upon.... unless...

"ON THE CHANDELIERRRRRR~~~~~"

Between Backflips & Paperclips

Chapter:1

Apr 10, 2025

Now I'm hearing Yunaria with the voice of Leeloo from 5th element. I feel as frustrated as Ryujin rn. 😆

Space Cowboy Robot Love (SCRL)

Chapter:2

Apr 10, 2025

I couldn't avoid imagining the first scene as Hivemind trying to pitch to Japanese publishers. 😭😂

The end of the chapter was pretty out of nowhere. Man sees girl, girl sniffs him, nose draws blood, confession thrown down, acceptance on condition of more sniffing. I was just left with, Wut? 😂

Space Cowboy Robot Love (SCRL)

Chapter:1

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