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Nov 18, 2025
To:Tamuna Tsertsvadze
Thank you Tamuna for taking the time to read it and offer your feedback! I appreciate your suggestions and will definitely consider them for improvements.
Nov 17, 2025
The start is great! I liked the storyline. Honestly a very good read!
Wow, you got me hooked with that first chapter!
The plot is engaging and the comedy is very well done. I liked it a lot. He shot a glance and made a promise, that was hilarious. You nailed the comedy aspect.
The pacing is good and the mystery is balanced, also the covered bodies created a gloomy moment, so I guess the start is really good!
The start is very good!