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Nov 27, 2025

The start was so vivid, I can instantly feel all the emotions, I can totally understand the work you’ve put into this Atsuko(Owner)!

Good Morning, Atsuko!

Chapter:1

Nov 27, 2025

PEAK ALERT!

Cullgrade

Chapter:1

Nov 27, 2025

For me this is peak start, I loved the story so far! ^^

Control My Life!

Chapter:2

Nov 26, 2025

“I mean what did you expect” “…N-natural…” These lines were so funny, Naomi snapping on Riku had depth and drama, I liked it! Poor Riku I felt bad for him when Naomi said all those hurtful words, which also means you did a very good job at making emotional scenes shine. Naomi is very very very ambitious. You created very dynamic characters like Naomi and Riku. Can’t wait to read more!

Miss Kagayaki: Won't the Ice Princess of K-Pop's Childhood Friend Deem Her Worthy?!

Chapter:0

Nov 26, 2025

To: Epti

First of all thank you for reading the chapter and for your feedback Epti! While this is my first release on Honeyfeed, I'm not a first-time novel writer. This is an action thriller, not a drama romance, and the detailed explanation of Haruki's Shodan-level skills is intentional ‘cus it makes the action feel earned and realistic.
I've ensured dialogues and action beats are separated by paragraph breaks for clarity and pacing. Finally, the Kyoto-Osaka commute is a deliberate plot point. (If you don't know), this journey is very common and affordable for students in the region, and even though it's fiction, I'm striving to keep the world's logistics as precise as possible. Hope you have a good day!

The Incurrence: Hexed Fate

Chapter:1

Nov 26, 2025

To:Chris Zee

“Zero Two” LOLOL, I’m glad you liked it Chris, I’ll release more chapters soon. Have a great day!

The Incurrence: Hexed Fate

Chapter:1

Nov 22, 2025

I’m intrigued with the start, never thought a novel’s chapter can start with an email like that. Your novel gets 5/5 stars from me!

Kenbōshō Man

Chapter:0

Nov 21, 2025

What a cliffhanger, hope Sayuri and her mom is safe, Sayuri was so sweet, aww her mom bought her a mirror, Kit teasing Naoki about Riku was hilarious! The way Kit talks using silly and cute words, it makes Kit’s character even more better. Can’t wait to read more. This chapter was really good!

Toy Master

Chapter:1

Nov 21, 2025

The chapter was so heartwarming, Kit is so cute, Riku’s emotions were portrayed beautifully, the conversations between Kit and Riku were really sweet, it made my day! The urge to read “naming a Kitsune wasn’t on my bucket list” instead of “naming a Kitsune wasn’t on my list of things” was a bit high LOL Just Kidding. It was sweet and an amazing read! Moving onto the next chapter.

Toy Master

Chapter:0

Nov 20, 2025

The novel is so heartwarming, I can feel all the emotions poured into it. Sayuri’s reactions were hilarious, this chapter was really really really good! I can’t wait to read more and find out what happens to Sayuri next, those cat ears, quite the suspense with how those cat ears appeared. I can understand the longing to make friends and keeping those good friendships alive is hard. All the imageries in your novel were very powerful and the cover art is so beautiful and cute… I can’t bre… Also “the Fighter of Mice, Squirrels and Socks” that made me laugh too LOL. This chapter was a very enjoyable read. If I could give it a rating, I’d definitely be giving it 10/10.

Cat Got My Tongue

Chapter:0

Nov 18, 2025

To:Tamuna Tsertsvadze

Thank you Tamuna for taking the time to read it and offer your feedback! I appreciate your suggestions and will definitely consider them for improvements.

The Incurrence: Hexed Fate

Chapter:0

Nov 17, 2025

The start is great! I liked the storyline. Honestly a very good read!

Magical Intern Ayame

Chapter:1

Nov 17, 2025

Wow, you got me hooked with that first chapter!

Hide Me From The Eyes

Chapter:0

Nov 17, 2025

The plot is engaging and the comedy is very well done. I liked it a lot. He shot a glance and made a promise, that was hilarious. You nailed the comedy aspect.

M-SERT: The Misfit Squad, Shibuya Division

Chapter:0

Nov 17, 2025

The pacing is good and the mystery is balanced, also the covered bodies created a gloomy moment, so I guess the start is really good!

I Will Arrest the Yōkai that Killed My Parents

Chapter:1

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