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My passion is building worlds, relationships, and characters. I hope to share that.
Currently, I am working on a story called Extirpation about a family dealing with the end of the world together.
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May 23, 2025
To:Bubbles
Looks like that is an artifact of editing… oops :)
I see what you mean lol. Probably couldve added some more nuanced scenes to show that they aren’t just always at odds, but regardless I’m happy for the feedback :)
I’m glad it was properly signposted :) I hope it wasn’t TOO obvious, but among the reveals in this story, I did intend for this to be fairly straightforward to predict, so I’m glad that landed.
Yeah, it’s possible I misrepresented her character here a bit. But what I think I was trying to go for is the idea that she believes she won’t be seen unless she has results, so that becomes her one and only focus. I probably could have made her less stable to make it seem more natural though
Apr 25, 2025
To:Feeso
Hey, thanks so much for reading! Glad you enjoyed. The cover art was commissioned, yes. I’m very happy with it, and am also against using AI for art where possible :)
Apr 02, 2025
fascinating premise and slick writing, excited to read more
Mar 30, 2025
To:Chickenparm45
Glad you enjoyed! Thanks for reading!
Mar 29, 2025
To:Joya
hey joya, thanks for reading! I'm glad you like the style.
To:TheWriteKC
Thanks so much for reading! I'm glad you enjoyed!
Mar 28, 2025
Hey, thanks for reading! I ended up editing this chapter! Be sure to give it another read before reading what comes next :)
Mar 26, 2025
booba
Mar 18, 2025
ahhhh very satisfying. i like where you ended it because it seems like things can only go downhill for them after this haha, so a nice place to cut it
Thanks for the comment and feedback Bubbles! I'm really glad to hear you enjoyed May and Alice.
I see what you mean with the way I describe the panic/dread. I think I definitely abuse describing motions instead of proper thoughts/emotions and assuming the reader knows why the characters are doing these physical things, when in reality the information is only complete in my head. Do you have any particular tips, or just to watch out for it in the future? Thanks!
Mar 17, 2025
To:Slow
Glad you enjoyed, Slow. Maybe it isn’t hopeless, who knows ¯\_(ツ)_/¯
To:_Caity_
Ah yeah, I could see that getting mixed up that way! I'm glad this chapter was effective for you, I really enjoyed writing the dynamic on display in this scene. (I also found some more repetition here 😐 oops)
