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Lemons

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My passion is building stories and characters.

I put a lot of emphasis in my stories on the bonds between people, and the freedom we have to choose our own path.

registered at: Feb 24, 2025

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Oct 24, 2025

To:Cashew Cocoa

I’ve gotten a lot of similar comments on the ambiguity of the ending so you’re definitely not alone, but I like it and think it represents the story and its themes well.

Bianca’s arc is unexplored mostly due to time constraints unfortunately :( but were I to write a sequel it would likely focus on her actions in the time gap. Might start writing something like that for HF at some point…

Regardless, I appreciate you reading and your comments! Thanks!

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Chapter:39

Oct 24, 2025

To:Cashew Cocoa

It makes me very happy that it landed for you! thanks so much for reading cashew :)

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Chapter:37

Oct 16, 2025

I like the style so far, especially of Ayumu’s cartoonishly exaggerated internal monologue. it’s very animated in a clever and fun way. i will read more tomorrow. nice work :)

The Genius Mage is Actually a Failure?!

Chapter:0

Aug 27, 2025

damn she crazy huh D:

agreed that the self-possession was confusing, but it felt like that was the intent. It did feel a bit strange that the protagonist knew what she meant, though, so idk

Otherworldly Acumen: The System's Rigged Against Me!

Chapter:2

Aug 27, 2025

love the protag so far, i find characters that are very competent in a narrow range of areas generally interesting, and that's what I'm taking from this guy so far. the last line in particular was super effective for me. i was a bit confused at the start, but in an intrigued way, if that makes sense. will read more as i have time for sure!

Otherworldly Acumen: The System's Rigged Against Me!

Chapter:0

Jul 31, 2025

I have to say I’m really enjoying this in concept and execution. not sure if it’s just taste or some more objective quality, but it feels cleaner and better-conceived than work i’ve read of yours in the past. That’s not a dig on your past work, mind you, but a merit of this story :)

strong characterization from you as always, and I’m excited to dig into more plot going forward. good stuff!

Fairy Life in the Second World

Chapter:1

Jun 23, 2025

To:Cashew Cocoa

Glad you’re enjoying Cashew!! Let me know your thoughts down the line, too, if you choose to continue :)

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Chapter:1

May 23, 2025

To:Bubbles

Looks like that is an artifact of editing… oops :)

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Chapter:9

May 23, 2025

To:Bubbles

I see what you mean lol. Probably couldve added some more nuanced scenes to show that they aren’t just always at odds, but regardless I’m happy for the feedback :)

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Chapter:10

May 23, 2025

To:Bubbles

I’m glad it was properly signposted :) I hope it wasn’t TOO obvious, but among the reveals in this story, I did intend for this to be fairly straightforward to predict, so I’m glad that landed.

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Chapter:28

May 23, 2025

To:Bubbles

Yeah, it’s possible I misrepresented her character here a bit. But what I think I was trying to go for is the idea that she believes she won’t be seen unless she has results, so that becomes her one and only focus. I probably could have made her less stable to make it seem more natural though

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Chapter:32

Apr 25, 2025

To:Feeso

Hey, thanks so much for reading! Glad you enjoyed. The cover art was commissioned, yes. I’m very happy with it, and am also against using AI for art where possible :)

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Chapter:1

Apr 02, 2025

fascinating premise and slick writing, excited to read more

Mr. Atlas

Chapter:2

Mar 30, 2025

To:Chickenparm45

Glad you enjoyed! Thanks for reading!

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Chapter:13

Mar 29, 2025

To:Joya

hey joya, thanks for reading! I'm glad you like the style.

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