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aaa

Jun 04, 2025

That is adorable

Is It Voodoo If It's Mutual?

Chapter:1

Mar 28, 2025

you mostly have ne here because of Tomie.

And that was a good way to end chapter 1.

Zongman: Becoming Prime Minister in the Conan Universe

Zongman: Becoming Prime Minister in the Conan Universe

Chapter:1

Mar 26, 2025

To:Nika Zimt

You'r welcome! I know that feeling, and I am glad I made you happy with them. You never stop learning to write, and that is what is beautiful. More reason to try different genres.

Love in Translation: I was Summoned to Another World by A Cute Elf Girl, but I don’t Speak her Language?!

Chapter:1

Mar 26, 2025

Good luck with figuring out your own style. It can take a long time to learn what works and what doesn't for you.

Love in Translation: I was Summoned to Another World by A Cute Elf Girl, but I don’t Speak her Language?!

Chapter:9

Mar 26, 2025

As already was pointed out, it is possible to get a hint of what is happening, but you cannot expect every reader to get through and feel the scene if it is filled with dialogue they cannot understand.

But, other than that, it is clear at the end that he agreed to something, not knowing what.

Love in Translation: I was Summoned to Another World by A Cute Elf Girl, but I don’t Speak her Language?!

Chapter:8

Mar 26, 2025

Ah, yes, the weight of nobility

Love in Translation: I was Summoned to Another World by A Cute Elf Girl, but I don’t Speak her Language?!

Chapter:7

Mar 26, 2025

He basically just met her and he already believes is a full relationship. It's going there, though.

Love in Translation: I was Summoned to Another World by A Cute Elf Girl, but I don’t Speak her Language?!

Chapter:6

Mar 26, 2025

There is always room to allow yourself be vulnerable.

Love in Translation: I was Summoned to Another World by A Cute Elf Girl, but I don’t Speak her Language?!

Chapter:5

Mar 26, 2025

Gets sent to another world, gets a cute elf wife, plays games with her, she feeds him, and then they share a bed to sleep. Where is my cute elf waifu?

Love in Translation: I was Summoned to Another World by A Cute Elf Girl, but I don’t Speak her Language?!

Chapter:4

Mar 26, 2025

That was uncomfortable. Whoever she was, she didn't seem to like out protagonist.

Love in Translation: I was Summoned to Another World by A Cute Elf Girl, but I don’t Speak her Language?!

Chapter:3

Mar 26, 2025

where my elf wife to do some gaming? u.u

Love in Translation: I was Summoned to Another World by A Cute Elf Girl, but I don’t Speak her Language?!

Chapter:2

Mar 26, 2025

So you had to restart? I hope the changes are to your liking. Going to follow the story and continue reading, so far is good.

Love in Translation: I was Summoned to Another World by A Cute Elf Girl, but I don’t Speak her Language?!

Chapter:1

Mar 24, 2025

Ok, I did not want to go to bed sad but here I am.

My dear Luna (moon)

Chapter:3

Mar 24, 2025

To:haru

Okay, thanks. I need to check that out, as I am still getting used to writing in English (second language). I will do a reread of everything and see what to fix around tomorrow.

Thanks again :D

Gunlinger's Gambits cover with Marika in the front

Gunslinger's Gambit (A modern/western fantasy, action litRPG)

Chapter:1

Mar 24, 2025

All I can say as criticism here is to worry about the spaces between the paragraphs. It can confuse the reader. But it is an interesting story and I actually want to know where it goes.

My dear Luna (moon)

Chapter:1