Jul 26, 2021
To:otkrlj
The novel isn't finished, has a lot to come and it is my first time writing a complete novel. If the writing style has bothered you, I am sorry I can't do anything about that. You may even stop reading because of it and I would understand. Also sorry for the mistakes but the contest is clearly for "Amateur" writers who need to get more attention from other readers and my book is kinda like that. So don't wait for an "Amazingly Wroten" novel from it. My main language isn't even English neither. Also, you said my characters looked like they have no emotion, but I am trying to tell the story's important parts. When the time comes, their emotion will be portrayed better. So If you have any other things to say, I will wait happily.