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May 25, 2025
I am enjoying Rea’s internal dialogue. Also, I think the you have captured the overall mood of the space station well, especially the boredom and the interaction of people who are used to having each other around.
She finally got her nails painted.
To:Mara
I truly understand. I totally get your character. Rea is a wonderful character, and I get what you were going for. I only mentioned it because so many in the comments before could not see it.
Grief is a very difficult thing to process, but this chapter ends with hope.
May 24, 2025
This story is different than your other stories. at the same time it is Uniquely you. I like how Rea is trying to process something she doesn’t understand. She is obsessed with it almost to the point of risking her safety. I like her.
I think her understanding of her feelings is moving at an appropriate pace. Also the idea that robots and androids designed to work close to and look like humans gaining human emotions, or something like them has been hypothesized. Thank you for taking me on her journey.
I am enjoying reading this. An android that is nearly human makes for an interesting story. I have always wanted to write one about an android that is designed to mimic humans. I am looking forward to seeing where this goes. Rea is showing signs of adapting human behavior and feeling. that you mentioned that there is an android culture implies that these types of androids are free in this society. That to me is interesting. In a way Rea is similar to. R. Daneel Olivaw from Asimov’s robot and foundation stories. In that regard I am definitely interested in how she evolves.
I am enjoying the story so far. I look forward to see where it goes.
Exactly. I think that is why I love your stories so much. It is like method acting, only for writers.
Thanks.
May 23, 2025
I look forward to your next volume
This was a great little story. I loved it.
I feel Miriam. 😢
The story definitely has horror elements, but it is more thriller. You write the tension and fear well. It sounds like you write like me. I create characters and then put them in a situation. Then the story happens.
That is one way to get a beautiful woman in bed with you. All joking aside, this was a well written chapter. You have taken advantage of the previous chapter and built up the tension. I am enjoying reading your stories. I love your writing style.