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Aug 07, 2025

I enjoyed the pace of this chapter. It is the first time that we are actually getting to know Aki. I am wondering how much of her behavior is herself, and how much is driven by a bond to both Selene and Rina because they both gave her part of their life force. There will be a strong relationship between these three. I am curious on how it plays out.

The Sun Will Rise Again

Chapter:21

Aug 07, 2025

To:Analeia

thank you

The Last Revision

Chapter:10

Aug 07, 2025

He is definitely showing reasoning skills well beyond his years. I think that it might not be to wise to let too many people know.

Brown Sugar Cinderella

Chapter:12

Aug 07, 2025

First, like everyone else, why Duxie said what she said. I could only guess. For now, I will leave it as some foreshadowing. I also like how you treated the village they came across, contrasting prejudice with reality.

Kingdoms of Sin: The Hero Is Dead

Chapter:13

Aug 07, 2025

To:Ramen-sensei

No problem. I will add your story to my reading list.

Dominion Protocol Volume 12: Forgotten Stories

Chapter:1

Aug 07, 2025

To:Ramen-sensei

Thanks for your support.🙏

Dominion Protocol Volume 12: Forgotten Stories

Chapter:1

Aug 07, 2025

Thanks for reading. More will be revealed tomorrow, so I don't want to say much. This story she will be working on my take of a murder that happened over 50 years ago that was surrounded with mystery and conspiracy.

This novel was my attempt to reinvent her as a detective.

Dominion Protocol Volume 12: Forgotten Stories

Chapter:1

Aug 07, 2025

To:Mara

TBH, I expected a little more in the final conflict. in the end. I also had prepared myself for the fact that Se-le-ni and Me-la-ni would never be together again. I wasn't expecting the power of love to save all when everything was at the brink of loss, but I love that it was. Another think that I liked a lot about the ending was that the character that brought them together walked away never to be seen again at the end. It reminded me of the ending of the Leningrad Cowboy movie where the manager seeing that they were succesful walked away into the night. It was a touching ending. Everything wrapped up nicely, but left it open for a sequel if your characters demanded one.

Power of the Seed

Chapter:34

Aug 06, 2025

wow. What an ending. Not necessarily the one I wanted, but I liked it. I like the message: Love conquers all.

Power of the Seed

Chapter:34

Aug 06, 2025

That was cruel not letting us know she survived until the end. I loved it.

Power of the Seed

Chapter:33

Aug 06, 2025

So she is a caring god.

Power of the Seed

Chapter:32

Aug 06, 2025

Exciting. I guess that is way with untested technology ( or magic).

Power of the Seed

Chapter:31

Aug 06, 2025

Si-ri seems awfully calm given the situation. Can we trust her?

Power of the Seed

Chapter:30

Aug 06, 2025

Oh? Where is she? The Ether? The Astral Plane?

Power of the Seed

Chapter:29

Aug 06, 2025

No. The suspense is killing me. 😭

Power of the Seed

Chapter:28

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