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Oct 20, 2025
To:Mai
Thanks. I try. This is a side story for my other series that i wrote. I was going for that feel.
ok. so now the true competition is beginning.
I like how the action scenes was not predictable. I am wondering where things go from here.
Changing for herself makes it a positive change. also a more difficult one. I hope she succeeds, but I am bracing myself for heartache and tears. 😭
It was only a matter of time that she had competition.
what do you think she will do to make him notice. I really like her as a character. so much about her resonates with me.
I think it would be hard to suddenly date a childhood friend. There is so much more at stake.
I was half expecting Valentines chocolate, but this was funny. I wonder what comes next.
To:Mara
we will see.
By the way, i wasn’t sure if i should laugh or cry here.
I totally understand how she feels, but she did give up easily. Change takes time.
Oct 19, 2025
This was not at all what I was expecting. But I love it. I really like how the voice of the narrator changes at the end. It is almost like the spirit in the box is there. Simply great writing.
Interesting story. The Hunter has opened Pandora’s box, or something like it. This can’t be good.
Gemini is right. this one was a tear jerker. I didn’t expect the helper to be a spirit too. Some kind of kitsune?
I am wondering if the makeover will be enough. Maybe she catches the eye of another guy, or girl. So many possibilities. Good stories make me think about these things. Thank you for sharing this one.