May 20, 2025
To:Cacalotlraven
I quite like your art! :)
Regarding the line breaks, i'm not sure we're talking about the same thing.
Doña is having a
rather embarassing day.
^Breaks like these are what I was talking about. I don't think they actually break up the scenes (since the scene doesn't change, the breaks occur in the middle of sentences), but they really hurt the reading flow. Are you sure these weren't on accident? Feels like the kinda thing that might happen while pasting text into the editor
