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Hello I'm Chris Zee, I'm an Otaku who loves isekai, romance, slice of life, action etc... I also like writing and reading.
Oh and if you're interested in my stories give them a read, I swear I won't disappoint. (โ โ โ โฟโ โโ )
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Oct 02, 2025
To:Deleted User
Thanks for the comment, I'm glad you liked it. It's only gonna get better from here... The action is on it's way... I did highlight that this story is inspired by Dandadan. So it's about to get hectic.
To:Casha
๐คฃ๐คฃ๐คฃ Yeah... Ryota is a dumb ass who doesn't want to listen to anyone but himself... Haruki really does deserve compensation hehehe ๐คฃ Thanks for the comment. Don't forget to come back for the next chapter.
Interesting, very interesting... can't wait to see the love confession. Nice opening ๐. I like this story a lot... hehehe... I'm sucker for high school romances
To:IMASIAN
Thank you so much ๐ญ. I was actually about to give up since it wasn't getting that many readers but now I'll shove that thought. Don't forget to continue reading. Chapter 3, 5, and 6 are pretty... interesting.... Hehehe. Thanks again.
Oct 01, 2025
Thanks for the comment; I'm glad you liked it, it's only gonna get better. If you want we can be writing buddies since you want feedback... we can even give each other ideas and stuff... thanks again. Hope you'll come back for more (*๏ผโ๏ผ)๏พ
Yeah, thanks I try my best to impress but unfortunately ๐ no one but you reads it which turns my motivation down a little. But thanks for noticing the improvement. ๐ซก
To:Kodoko Kagame
That's what I've been thinkin' too. This story has incredible potential but my boy Koi-kun still hasn't added depth yet... but I'm confident he'll add some. Koi my dude if you're reading this: take my advice and add a larger cast of characters and some sort of conflict so that the story will have depth ๐. Thanks for reading my dudes masterpiece kagame I'm sure he's super thrilled, hehehe ๐
Awesome, simply Awesome ๐.
But I have questions. 1. Is she not human? (She doesn't feel cold or taste food. So that's why I'm asking. 2. Why is my dude trying to kill himself? (Stupid question. I know but I'm curious ๐ค.
And that's about it. But I love their interactions. Your characters are peak (^_^)v.
To:Kawaii Koi
Just what are you plotting you monster ๐ค. Please don't leave her undeveloped, because she has the potential to be best girl ๐ญ
Sep 30, 2025
Ayaka I love you ๐ญ. Hope she will have a love interest in the future. Maybe Haruto himself... can't wait to find out (o^๏ผ^o)
Sep 29, 2025
I feel bad for Kaito. Getting attacked by gross slime must be unpleasant (while reading I actually pictured the slime as something even more gross than jelly ๐ )
ใDon't worry Kaito, life has a lot of detoursใ
Loving the interactions between them. Pretty cool. Keep cookin'.
No problem. You should join the honeyfeed discord server to promote your novels. Especially M.F.I.Y.S
I love this chapter. Takashi is pretty cool. I like characters who have neutral expressions and personalities. Because It just means their hearts are bigger than those who wear their emotions on their sleeves.
Great depiction of slice of life. But you have to take note of this: Note: you shouldn't use emoticons to show a character's expression when talking or reacting or anything. Use dialogue tags instead. Hope you don't mind me being a know it all... hehe.
I'll be your novel's first fan. (*^^*)
Oh and you should check out my novel... if you don't mind... (๏พใผ๏พ*)
Sep 28, 2025
I'm glad you took my advice, this chapter is pretty awesome. Now you can even experiment with a few things like maybe making a love triangle between them or introducing another character, whatever works best. But this is a pretty cool chapter. Nice work.