Apr 05, 2026

How wholesome. Kengo really deserved some quiet time especially since a lot of BS has happened to him. I also love the progression of his relationship with Kurumi. Their awkward moments are heartwarming. Looking forward to the next. Rating: 9.2-10. Progression baby.

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Apr 05, 2026

Quite the interesting premise. I kinda feel scared knowing all of them are gonna be immortal for an eternity without being able to move. It's sad when you think about it. I enjoyed this first chapter especially because of the computer. I hope it will have an irl avatar so that it and Sirius will be together for the remaining days. Overall, this chapter was a great start. 9.1-10. Very intriguing.

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Apr 05, 2026

Okay this chapter actually comes close to the banger intro. I like the way you handled his introspection in the first half. It was relatable (to a certain degree) and it really succeeded in the 'show don't tell technique' which I still have trouble with when writing. I think you should lean into his serious introspection later in the story as this will be great character development for our glorious king. I really enjoyed this one not gonna lie. Looking forward to the next. Rating: 9.0-10. His depth is palpable and his development seems to be approaching. Oh and if you wouldn't mind, please check out my romcom entry. I'm curious to know what your thoughts will be on it.

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Apr 05, 2026

Okay, I hate Hanawa now. 😤 She did our king dirty. Why did she just have to lie to him only to spread blasphemy about him. She's a bitch. Anyway, this chapter was... yeah it caught me of guard with the, ahem (B-job). I wasn't expecting it. Even though I knew this story is ecchi😅. But please don't show the, ahem (Sex scenes) cuz this might get you out of the contests top 10 lol. Overall. This one was both fun and funny. Rating: 8.9-10. The Shuntaro × Mamie dynamic is peak.

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Apr 05, 2026

Well, well, well, it looks like someone's getting laid. Lol. Not bad. I'm digging this Hanami-senpai. She's pretty beautiful, and she's an E-cup. What more could a guy want. Mamie, on the other hand, is definitely best girl material. Rating: 8.7-10. We got an E-cup baddie ladies and gentlemen

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Apr 05, 2026

Do not worry your lordship, Queen green haired girl will soon be with you. I as your loyal follower will make sure if it. I'll even hunt down the god of your world (Gemini) and force him to make it so that you see her. Lmao 🤣. This chapter was good. I still think chapter one is peak that won't be matched though. This one was nothing but inner thoughts but it was still awesome. Shuntaro is a great protag no doubt. Rating: 8.7-10. Tea party here we come!

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Apr 05, 2026

Shit, the king has been dethroned by the queen 👸. No I refuse. I still say: Praise the king of sigma males!!! This chapter was also quite great. But not as amazing as the previous, but that doesn't mean it wasn't good. It pushes the story forward and that's what we're here for. Rating: 8.5-10. Praise the Horny Queen.

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Apr 05, 2026

To:Gemini Daydream

Indeed lmao 🤣

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Apr 05, 2026

Praise the delusional sigma male, he who sacrifices all to get laid, he who represents the struggle of all man, he who represents the concept of: Virginity, he who will get laaaaaiiiid!!! Lmaoooooo!!!🤣. This is the funniest thing I've read all month. Contenders are, An Original Sin, My Romantic comedy in the heartbreak Society, and The Girl from the Grocery Store. Anyway I really enjoyed this one. At first I was hesitant cuz of the title lol. But now I know that I've been sleeping on a 'banger', (Get it). Overall, very funny Chapter. Rating: 9.4-10. Simply amazing. Praise the king of sigma males.

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Apr 05, 2026

Wow, wow, wow!!! This chapter was straight fire. The way Nell just came into existence in such a gory way was so vivid and well written. His interactions with humans are funny as hell. Especially when he met Mirror-san 🪞 lol. He reminds me of The Goddess of Heaven, Kitsune from my novel (Oubaitori). I bet if these two were in one room they'd be up each othet throats lol since they are so similar. Overall this chapter was amazing. Rating: 9.9-10. Incredible introduction l.

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Apr 04, 2026

To:Deleted User

Thanks Astro bro. You've been here since day one (since I first started writing on honeyfeed) so it's no biggie. Thanks for commenting.

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Apr 02, 2026

To:Mochi

Thanks, Mochi. I hope you'll continue to enjoy it.

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Mar 31, 2026

To:Adnan-The-Real-One

Okay. Thanks again.

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Mar 31, 2026

To:Adnan-The-Real-One

Thank you so much. That means a lot. I wonder how you'll react to Chapters 16,17, and 18. The A— Arc. I can't tell you cuz spoilers lol.

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Mar 31, 2026

To:Adnan-The-Real-One

Thank you. Thanks for commenting and reading. I hope you'll enjoy the rest.

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