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Hello I'm Chris Zee, I'm an Otaku who loves isekai, romance, slice of life, action etc... I also like writing and reading.
Oh and if you're interested in my story give it a read. (◠‿◕)
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Oct 07, 2025
Now I get it... she's a ghost, or death (LOL). It makes sense that she couldn't feel the weather or taste the food.
I feel so sad for her, I wonder how she died. Oh and the reveal was fire. You gradually left hints that finally paid off in the reveal. That really inspired me cause I'm not good at writing plot twists. Another great chapter, you've got some serious talent 😁🫡. Oh and if you wouldn't mind could you read My horror story and tell me what you think.
Awesome chapter, Alexis is pretty sweet. She seems like a positive girl. And the ending was pretty great. But word of advice:
You need to stop making long paragraphs. (I'm not trying to be mean, I only wish to help.) Just separate them into smaller paragraphs for a better reading experience. This will make all your stories easier to read. But overall I like it. Hope you'll take my advice.
Oct 06, 2025
To:Isla Morales
I'd love to but I'm just a minor. I'm 17 so I wouldn't be able to compensate you. But thanks for the kind offer. I'm glad you liked my story.
To:spicarie
Thanks for the comment. I'm glad you noticed that the mansion is toying with them. It's basically separating them on purpose😁. Thanks again, hope you'll keep reading, cause it's about to get exciting.
Oct 05, 2025
"I was dreaming about throwing you into the river" got be dyin' 🤣. Takeshi is a menace... hehehe. Its go some pretty great humor. 👍
Slice of life, slice of life... I love it when a story perfectly portrays slice of life. This chapter was pretty good, but I think I enjoyed chapter 1 more... I'll be reading chapter 3 soon. Great work.
Oct 03, 2025
Peak my dude. Koharu is going through alot. Now we understand why he bullied her, and his vow to protect her was awesome. (But. You should review your chapter, Koharu's crash out is repetitive, meaning you should refine it so it doesn't feel like she's saying the same thing over and over) Great chapter my dude, it's pretty sad, Koharu will be a relatable character to so many readers... keep workin' hard my dude.
To:Kawaii Koi
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Thanks brother, you're a real one. It's only thanks to you that I didn't give up. I experienced writer's block a few days ago. But now I'm finally back hehe... I'm glad that I inspire you (LOL) It means a lot bro... keep workin' hard as well... I wanna see more main cast members in L.T.L.Y. 😁
Oct 02, 2025
To:Casha
Thanks for the comment... hehehe.... it's about to get worse...
To:AlexOtaku
Thanks for the comment, I'm glad you liked it. It's only gonna get better from here... The action is on it's way... I did highlight that this story is inspired by Dandadan. So it's about to get hectic.
🤣🤣🤣 Yeah... Ryota is a dumb ass who doesn't want to listen to anyone but himself... Haruki really does deserve compensation hehehe 🤣 Thanks for the comment. Don't forget to come back for the next chapter.
Interesting, very interesting... can't wait to see the love confession. Nice opening 👌. I like this story a lot... hehehe... I'm sucker for high school romances
To:IMASIAN
Thank you so much 😭. I was actually about to give up since it wasn't getting that many readers but now I'll shove that thought. Don't forget to continue reading. Chapter 3, 5, and 6 are pretty... interesting.... Hehehe. Thanks again.
Oct 01, 2025
Thanks for the comment; I'm glad you liked it, it's only gonna get better. If you want we can be writing buddies since you want feedback... we can even give each other ideas and stuff... thanks again. Hope you'll come back for more (*>∇<)ノ
Yeah, thanks I try my best to impress but unfortunately 😕 no one but you reads it which turns my motivation down a little. But thanks for noticing the improvement. 🫡