Jul 31, 2025

To:Ramen-sensei

No worries, I appreciate the feedback!
I can see what you mean. The plan with the synopsis was not to spoil too many elements of the story, but I guess I might've left out too much info.
Now that I'm getting a better grasp of where I want the story to head, it may be time for me to update it.

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Jul 24, 2025

To:Bauyrzhan

Hi, and thanks for the compliment!
I'm def going to read a few of the other entries for the Isekai writing contest (and others if they interest me), so I'd be down to give your story a read. Though I'm mainly doing so next month, as I don't want everyone's ideas flooding over my own while I form the layout of my story.

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Jul 20, 2025

To:Nato_otan1

Lol. That's a great and funny idea as Kaito does really get on Rachael's nerves

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