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Also Steampocalypse on Tapas, Ao3, and Anilist. A reader who's a fan of idols, BL, and shoujo. A writer for a long time who's considering writing webnovels for the first time. (He/him, young adult)
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Jul 30, 2025
Something is clearly wrong, there's NATURE here LOVE her immediately helping people. This story is genuinely so good.
So she gets saved for being kind, that's a really fun setup!! If I had a nickel for every isekai contest entry I've read on here with a nurse protagonist, I'd have two nickels... (not mine obviously, the work called A Mythic Love Affair) I'm really liking this beginning.
Oh the media res is hella fun it's an exciting bit throwing us into this world, no context but at the same time not too hard to follow
Love Indra's dialogue and internal monologue
Number gained! I honestly like that he's kind of homophobic, or at least judgemental—but won't make an issue of it, which I'm sure Jaron appreciates.
"I don't know much about anything Indian, other than the fact that I am Indian" Same man....The non-first-gen immigrant life
Only a corner doodle, but you're drawing him after all... The stepdad really does feel like a real person. He has his own values and reputation he's trying to push but he's also really not that bad. Have you read In Other Lands? Not the plot, but the first meeting scene reminded me of it.
To:Mai
Thank you very much! I'll continue posting it at a quick rate. I am really happy about the fanart and I look forward to it if you do another :D
I like the setting a lot, especially as I learn more about it
To:Gurg
Killed by a giant rat, hoist on ye own petard.
Jul 29, 2025
Ah the two of them are sweet I'm surprised she didn't guess Mede was a phoenix from the vibes of the journal For how you can improve, you have some line by line things that are hard to point out without a copy/paste feature. For example the simile of the cave mouth is kind of a literal description of the cave mouth, there's a grammar error where she wouldn't let go of the root, etc. The dialogue of their developing relationship in this chapter is pretty and heartfelt but I feel like their relationship could have been grounded much more in emotions that we saw in the text and in non creepy moments.
To:Noel Elitia
I haven’t read your other works, I checked this out because I like idols. I’m looking forward to the future developments! Good luck :)
Thank you! I'm glad it feels unique.
Not gonna lie, I didn't think of how much the car messes up that equation. But she does eliminate the possibility very quickly, maybe that's why lol
"Knocked out a few people" OK so she always had fighting skills sjkldfklj I guessed they might be magic restraint chains after the language note, and they were! :D
