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Also Steampocalypse on Tapas, Ao3, and Anilist. A reader who's a fan of idols, BL, and shoujo. A writer for a long time who's considering writing webnovels for the first time. (He/him, young adult)
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Jul 30, 2025
I like the setting a lot, especially as I learn more about it
To:Gurg
Killed by a giant rat, hoist on ye own petard.
Jul 29, 2025
Ah the two of them are sweet I'm surprised she didn't guess Mede was a phoenix from the vibes of the journal For how you can improve, you have some line by line things that are hard to point out without a copy/paste feature. For example the simile of the cave mouth is kind of a literal description of the cave mouth, there's a grammar error where she wouldn't let go of the root, etc. The dialogue of their developing relationship in this chapter is pretty and heartfelt but I feel like their relationship could have been grounded much more in emotions that we saw in the text and in non creepy moments.
To:Noel Elitia
I haven’t read your other works, I checked this out because I like idols. I’m looking forward to the future developments! Good luck :)
Thank you! I'm glad it feels unique.
Not gonna lie, I didn't think of how much the car messes up that equation. But she does eliminate the possibility very quickly, maybe that's why lol
"Knocked out a few people" OK so she always had fighting skills sjkldfklj I guessed they might be magic restraint chains after the language note, and they were! :D
The moment of truth, where she goes for action! Though she gets upstaged, RIP. I do wonder where those fighting skills came from.
From a bad situation to a bad situation, this is so interesting and the tension is really strong
Isekai time! And now she's the badass type who will fight because she snapped like that. I wonder about the thief. Was he possessed? (Don't answer that)
Oh god, this is painful. You write the emotion so well, I feel it in my bones.
CHEATER! 🫵 I half expected them to kill her. That would have been crazy intense if so. I'm somewhat glad they didn't and we're spending more time in this plotline. Your prose continues to be great (and the dialogue's no longer bolded!), you do the vibe of her being suddenly feral and intimidating well. Have you read Skip Beat?
To:Jen_F
Thank you! And yes, definitely (re: the musings). Naomi's a fun combination of self-inserted quirks from me and writing quirks that I've noticed from other people. Like, the bird thought was pretty much a thought I had, but the specific exercise she mentioned I saw people talking about on a writing advice blog post, and there'll continue to be a mix of that!
It's pretty perfect pacing for Yayoi and Teri to have a solo conversation here and get to know each other as individuals like he was able to do with Taku before. I would be more concerned about the effects of these roses, though. LOVE how you write the magic system. It feels like something real and tangible, not just like information.
Thanks to Mai for this work's first fanart! Anyone else reading this, you can check it out in the Gallery! :D